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MY LAST GOODBYE by Member: Kursha Elliott, USA
From Comment about poem or author Response Country Response Added Jamee That was nice it to me was very deep kinda creepy but not in a bad way!!! keep at it!!! U.S. 5/9/2008 9:49:59 AM Stephanie I love this poem when my grandma died that is what i thouht because i did not want it to be her United States 4/29/2008 9:59:13 AM kerri grana i love this poem i would say it even better than this i would like to say this at my pawpaws funral usa nc greensboro 4/12/2008 10:49:48 AM Ice Ice Wangster this poem is so so deap, it made me weap...with tears East Compton 3/7/2008 1:52:21 PM Kursha l'm glad ya'll liked my poem. I hope to be getting some new ones up soon. Unite States 1/28/2008 1:10:12 PM amy i like it. even though its really depressing i think that anyone can relate usa 1/23/2008 9:54:00 AM angel oh my this strong but i like it it means alot usa 12/12/2007 9:58:44 AM carmen wow. this is so deep! i love it! united states 3/23/2007 3:42:32 PM MARTHA.YEPEZ THIS POEM REALLY GOT DUG INTO MY HEART.WHAT DO YOU THINK ABOUT THIS POEM THAT I WROTE: I WROTE YOUR NAME IN THE SKY, BUT THE WIND BLEW IT AWAY I WROTE YOUR NAME IN THE SAND, BUT THE WAVES WASHED IT AWAY I WROTE YOUR NAME IN MY HEART, AND FOREVER IT WILL STAY :HOPE YOU LIKED IT.I WANT TO BECOME A POET WHEN I GROW UP. LOS ANGELES 3/14/2007 7:47:14 PM vaaneesa marie elmore i love your poem it reminds meoff my father and how i felt after he died united states 3/14/2007 4:37:03 PM
Love's Existance by Member: Chrissie Chinebuah, Ghana
From Comment about poem or author Response Country Response Added thelma welcome to voices Chrissy you have given many good reasons here in yourpoem that love does exist, in our dreams, fears, nightmares, hopes and yet mostly in our hearts, I tend to agree. enjoyed the read. australia 5/9/2008 9:35:21 AM
MY FAREWELL by Member: Holly Terpstra, USA
From Comment about poem or author Response Country Response Added J. Wingo I Like it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! More. USA 5/9/2008 9:34:52 AM angelika palor i like it!!!!! philippines 3/16/2008 11:00:27 AM carljezthony d. gonzales very inspirational philippines 3/14/2008 12:02:43 AM roxanne a lorea your poem is very beautiful and inspirational thank you! and goodbye!!! philippines 3/14/2007 12:38:49 AM
LIVING IN A DREAM by Member: Marcia Schechinger, USA
From Comment about poem or author Response Country Response Added Lee Emmett oh, thank goodness for dreams ... wonderful poem again, Marcia ... Australia 5/9/2008 9:33:10 AM
MONEY by Member: Lisa Noe, USA
From Comment about poem or author Response Country Response Added Thelma Zaracostas Hi Lisa welcome to voices, Interesting read,you have given some food for thought here in your poem about how money is nothing but trouble! Australia 5/9/2008 9:28:35 AM
WAITING FOR NO-ONE by Member: Lee Emmett, Australia
From Comment about poem or author Response Country Response Added Lee thanks John, when re-read this, think that despite the irreparable wound of loss, still have life ... and it's important to make some positive contribution towards world ... others reassure me that some direction will emerge in time ... people are very kind ... and nature's beauty compels appreciation ... AUS 5/9/2008 9:22:19 AM john scott Every word life a knife to my heart,I surely do not know what I can do or say but given time I will try to find a way. Takes a lot of courage to let it all out like that, sometimes it's the best way Kind regards, John UK 5/9/2008 7:52:29 AM Lee Dear Sabeteh and Kanika Khanna, Thank you for your very kind responses - I really appreciate the support received from fellow Voicesnet poets, and enjoy reading your work too. Aus 12/7/2007 7:00:02 AM kanika khanna Very deep poem Lee. With this amazing imagery you have expressed palpable thoughts. Loved reading it. india 11/4/2007 8:56:39 AM sabeteh my words too, he is always with you. in all the realms of God you will be together. lots of love, a mother india 11/4/2007 8:20:13 AM
Surrender by Member: Heather Albinson, USA
From Comment about poem or author Response Country Response Added Thelma Zaracostas Heather clever, powerful and a very inspirational write. Australia 5/9/2008 9:10:50 AM Lee Emmett inspirational writing! ... powerful feelings come through ... Australia 5/9/2008 7:14:52 AM
Lost by Member: Mikal Cardine, USA
From Comment about poem or author Response Country Response Added kim wow cool USA 5/9/2008 9:03:17 AM kim woowb cool i llove this poem USA 5/9/2008 9:02:39 AM Jessie Yeah, give her money.. like all you no about her is that her names CAT and she lives in Canada, Woww. Canada 5/5/2008 5:22:27 PM Alice OMG! that is soooo sad!! it is really good though. i whish i was as good as you. i almost cried. i can't wait to read more of your poems!! keep it going! VA 5/2/2008 11:35:13 AM CAT wowwwweeeeeee wow. this is sure an amazing poet. you could be like famous or something... .just like how j.k. rowling became famous! OH MY GOD! you could be insanely famous! then could you tell me and give me money cus I;m the one that told you that you should try to be famous? I think that is a good idea. if you gave me money i would give it to little kids in africa who have nothing! I am a good person! :) canada 5/1/2008 5:23:46 PM conner windchap this is sooooo hot!!! united states 4/9/2008 12:38:45 PM conner windchap this is so hot!! united states 4/9/2008 12:36:58 PM Louise I thought it was an excellent poem the way it was so real and how tragic it was so well done! Paris 3/28/2008 6:10:55 AM
Lost by Member: Mikal Cardine, USA
From Comment about poem or author Response Country Response Added kim wow cool USA 5/9/2008 9:03:17 AM kim woowb cool i llove this poem USA 5/9/2008 9:02:39 AM Jessie Yeah, give her money.. like all you no about her is that her names CAT and she lives in Canada, Woww. Canada 5/5/2008 5:22:27 PM Alice OMG! that is soooo sad!! it is really good though. i whish i was as good as you. i almost cried. i can't wait to read more of your poems!! keep it going! VA 5/2/2008 11:35:13 AM CAT wowwwweeeeeee wow. this is sure an amazing poet. you could be like famous or something... .just like how j.k. rowling became famous! OH MY GOD! you could be insanely famous! then could you tell me and give me money cus I;m the one that told you that you should try to be famous? I think that is a good idea. if you gave me money i would give it to little kids in africa who have nothing! I am a good person! :) canada 5/1/2008 5:23:46 PM conner windchap this is sooooo hot!!! united states 4/9/2008 12:38:45 PM conner windchap this is so hot!! united states 4/9/2008 12:36:58 PM Louise I thought it was an excellent poem the way it was so real and how tragic it was so well done! Paris 3/28/2008 6:10:55 AM
GOOD NIGHT SLEEPY ONE by Member: Lee Emmett, Australia
From Comment about poem or author Response Country Response Added dowzdy cool poem usa 5/9/2008 8:59:28 AM dowzdy cool usa 5/9/2008 8:59:08 AM Lee Emmett thanks Adrienne, finding that the more writing doing, the more confident becoming ... put aside time every day to practice ... not everything works out ... but occasionally happy with result ... all the best ... Australia 5/7/2008 9:34:53 PM Adrienne Jenkins Lee Thank you for your kind words about my poem, A lover's dram.....your right should have been dream and I changed it. Did spell check on the poem and not the title. That will teach me. I have read several of your poems as well. Nice. Very nice. I am new at this....so I find it hard to come up with the words but I have such thoughts about life and how love is suppose to be...but I am finding that through lifes actual encourters, well that is a different story all together. I think this is such a awesome sight......here I am conversing with someone so very far away. Again thank you so much for your kindness........Happy writings to you. Adrienne Jenkins USA USA 5/7/2008 8:16:34 PM Lee glad you like it, Ed ... simple, but sweet ... for me, writing lullabies sometimes happens when in happy state, late at night ... AUS 4/15/2008 8:50:35 PM Ed Fabulous poem. Good Job on it! CAN 4/15/2008 5:10:50 PM Lee Thanks LALALA, glad you like it!! ... sometimes the simplest lines turn out okay ... AUS 4/10/2008 9:31:03 AM LALALA love it!! USA 4/10/2008 1:49:36 AM Lee Thanks Whitasha, enjoy writing the simple types of poems and sometimes in the 'lullaby' mood ... but tried opening with 'edge' of sadness with this one and finishing on happier note ... AUS 3/29/2008 4:13:45 AM Whitasha this was a good and nice poem iloved it USA 3/28/2008 11:43:53 PM Lee Thanks Faith, in my case probably not confidence, just a need to keep communicating since husband died ... a lot of what's written is not very good, but life's (and people) not perfect, and don't mind accepting warts at my age ... AUS 2/13/2008 5:37:40 PM Faith i really like this poem i wish i had the confeaden't to right poem's like you did but, i do have the confeaden'ts to right song's and do dance's. oklahoma 2/13/2008 2:30:47 PM Lee thanks saira khan - sometimes just start with a rhythm in head, and take it from there ... AUS 1/18/2008 7:57:52 AM saira khan shooooooo shweet poem i m gona safe it in my mob so dat i could read it b4 sleeping :) really good work u ve done Pakistan 1/16/2008 1:44:46 PM Lee Thanks Ren, Thelma and kanika, Every so often, when tired, try out a lullaby ... rather fun ... AUS 1/12/2008 8:32:56 AM kanika khanna Sho Shweet!! I loved the end. "sun will roll over the world bringing brightness to your door." india 1/12/2008 8:16:33 AM thelma Alittle gem Lee lovely gentle melody flows so peacefully through this great poem! enjoyed! australia 1/12/2008 7:13:24 AM Ren good night Lee! good night sleepy one... so full of hope :) Philippines 12/18/2007 9:43:32 PM Lee Thanks Emme - sometimes when a rhythm comes along, it's fun to rock along with it and soon the words take shape. Have you posted anything? If so, tell me where to look for your work, and I'll read yours too. Aus 11/28/2007 6:52:42 PM emma i love ur poem it was fab!!! and sooo cute u.k 11/28/2007 3:21:33 PM
GOOD NIGHT SLEEPY ONE by Member: Lee Emmett, Australia
From Comment about poem or author Response Country Response Added dowzdy cool poem usa 5/9/2008 8:59:28 AM dowzdy cool usa 5/9/2008 8:59:08 AM Lee Emmett thanks Adrienne, finding that the more writing doing, the more confident becoming ... put aside time every day to practice ... not everything works out ... but occasionally happy with result ... all the best ... Australia 5/7/2008 9:34:53 PM Adrienne Jenkins Lee Thank you for your kind words about my poem, A lover's dram.....your right should have been dream and I changed it. Did spell check on the poem and not the title. That will teach me. I have read several of your poems as well. Nice. Very nice. I am new at this....so I find it hard to come up with the words but I have such thoughts about life and how love is suppose to be...but I am finding that through lifes actual encourters, well that is a different story all together. I think this is such a awesome sight......here I am conversing with someone so very far away. Again thank you so much for your kindness........Happy writings to you. Adrienne Jenkins USA USA 5/7/2008 8:16:34 PM Lee glad you like it, Ed ... simple, but sweet ... for me, writing lullabies sometimes happens when in happy state, late at night ... AUS 4/15/2008 8:50:35 PM Ed Fabulous poem. Good Job on it! CAN 4/15/2008 5:10:50 PM Lee Thanks LALALA, glad you like it!! ... sometimes the simplest lines turn out okay ... AUS 4/10/2008 9:31:03 AM LALALA love it!! USA 4/10/2008 1:49:36 AM Lee Thanks Whitasha, enjoy writing the simple types of poems and sometimes in the 'lullaby' mood ... but tried opening with 'edge' of sadness with this one and finishing on happier note ... AUS 3/29/2008 4:13:45 AM Whitasha this was a good and nice poem iloved it USA 3/28/2008 11:43:53 PM Lee Thanks Faith, in my case probably not confidence, just a need to keep communicating since husband died ... a lot of what's written is not very good, but life's (and people) not perfect, and don't mind accepting warts at my age ... AUS 2/13/2008 5:37:40 PM Faith i really like this poem i wish i had the confeaden't to right poem's like you did but, i do have the confeaden'ts to right song's and do dance's. oklahoma 2/13/2008 2:30:47 PM Lee thanks saira khan - sometimes just start with a rhythm in head, and take it from there ... AUS 1/18/2008 7:57:52 AM saira khan shooooooo shweet poem i m gona safe it in my mob so dat i could read it b4 sleeping :) really good work u ve done Pakistan 1/16/2008 1:44:46 PM Lee Thanks Ren, Thelma and kanika, Every so often, when tired, try out a lullaby ... rather fun ... AUS 1/12/2008 8:32:56 AM kanika khanna Sho Shweet!! I loved the end. "sun will roll over the world bringing brightness to your door." india 1/12/2008 8:16:33 AM thelma Alittle gem Lee lovely gentle melody flows so peacefully through this great poem! enjoyed! australia 1/12/2008 7:13:24 AM Ren good night Lee! good night sleepy one... so full of hope :) Philippines 12/18/2007 9:43:32 PM Lee Thanks Emme - sometimes when a rhythm comes along, it's fun to rock along with it and soon the words take shape. Have you posted anything? If so, tell me where to look for your work, and I'll read yours too. Aus 11/28/2007 6:52:42 PM emma i love ur poem it was fab!!! and sooo cute u.k 11/28/2007 3:21:33 PM
A SMILE by Member: Satheesan Rangorath, India
From Comment about poem or author Response Country Response Added Satheesan Rangorath Hi Thank you Kim Schilling. Thanks for your kind words after reading my poem. Greetings Sathee India 5/9/2008 8:58:13 AM Kim Schilling A beautifully written poem, Sathee. Thanks for sharing! USA 5/8/2008 2:51:07 PM
life by Member: arika hefner, USA
From Comment about poem or author Response Country Response Added Thelma Zaracostas Very positive write re life Anika, enjoyed the read, welcome to voices keep writing,look forward to more ofyour work! Australia 5/9/2008 8:45:14 AM
A shirt for my shoe by Member: William F. Polden Sr., USA
From Comment about poem or author Response Country Response Added Thelma Zaracostas William so heartwrenching, thank you for sharing this poem here on voices, very emotional read! Australia 5/9/2008 8:34:10 AM Lee Emmett wow! ... strong emotional write ... got message straight to heart and gut! Australia 5/8/2008 9:16:46 PM
No Home by Member: Amy Harrington, USA
From Comment about poem or author Response Country Response Added Thelma Zaracostas HiAmy,welcome to voices very emotional read, look forward to reading more of your work soon! Australia 5/9/2008 8:16:43 AM
No Title by Member: Kelly-Anne Livesey, Canada
From Comment about poem or author Response Country Response Added Thelma Zaracostas Thanks Kelly-Anne for sharing this great poem here on voices, look forward to reading more of your work! Australia 5/9/2008 8:06:37 AM
The abstruse justice by Member: Megha Chaturvedi, India
From Comment about poem or author Response Country Response Added Thelma Zaracostas A poem full of so much sadness and pain, very emotional read!Megha welcome to voices! Australia 5/9/2008 8:01:33 AM Lee Emmett what a tragic situation ... great poetic expression ... Australia 5/8/2008 10:32:15 AM
GREY MORNING by Member: Lee Emmett, Australia
From Comment about poem or author Response Country Response Added Lee Emmett thanks Kim and Thelma ... started on a bit of a low, but progressively improved after left home for a while ... saw mates, resumed another writing project which has been shelved for nearly three years ... something's stirring again ... !!! Australia 5/9/2008 7:55:37 AM Thelma Zaracostas Well written Lee, feel your pain in your words! Australia 5/8/2008 10:35:18 PM Kim Schilling I could feel heart broken heart. Nice one, Lee. USA 5/8/2008 10:13:00 PM
SWINGS AND ROUNDABOUTS by Member: Lee Emmett, Australia
From Comment about poem or author Response Country Response Added Lee Emmett thanks William, still learning much about the site myself ... haven't tried the forums, tend more to appreciate the database facility which the site generously offers ... seems to be that if post work reasonably frequently, other readers might become interested ... really enjoying reading others' poems, and amazed at the interest in mine ... good luck with your writing ... great you have a focus ... still developing mine ... AUSTRALIA 5/9/2008 7:52:41 AM William F. Polden I wish to thank you for your response on my latest poem. And as I read the previous (for a better word) blog, I hope your business thrives in the near future. I, myself am a Fcience Fiction writer by nature and am hoping one day to have my stories on the silver screen... You'll have to forgive me, I don't know hope to traverse this website very well and any 'quick tips' in helping would be qreatly apprecated. Oh and if you could ( because I don't know how yet... inform the others on this site to keep an eye on me, I have some pretty awesome things to share with the world and let's just say > you're one of the first on board. Again, thanks and i'll keep reading you're poetry and listings... Thanks wfpolden2000@yahoo.com United States 5/9/2008 2:53:37 AM Lee thanks Brian, these things happen over time! AUS 4/28/2008 8:22:03 PM B I dont know what you will be when you grow up but you sure as hell wont be idle!!!!!!!!!!!!!. B N.I. 4/28/2008 5:15:24 AM
WAITING FOR NO-ONE by Member: Lee Emmett, Australia
From Comment about poem or author Response Country Response Added Lee thanks John, when re-read this, think that despite the irreparable wound of loss, still have life ... and it's important to make some positive contribution towards world ... others reassure me that some direction will emerge in time ... people are very kind ... and nature's beauty compels appreciation ... AUS 5/9/2008 9:22:19 AM john scott Every word life a knife to my heart,I surely do not know what I can do or say but given time I will try to find a way. Takes a lot of courage to let it all out like that, sometimes it's the best way Kind regards, John UK 5/9/2008 7:52:29 AM Lee Dear Sabeteh and Kanika Khanna, Thank you for your very kind responses - I really appreciate the support received from fellow Voicesnet poets, and enjoy reading your work too. Aus 12/7/2007 7:00:02 AM kanika khanna Very deep poem Lee. With this amazing imagery you have expressed palpable thoughts. Loved reading it. india 11/4/2007 8:56:39 AM sabeteh my words too, he is always with you. in all the realms of God you will be together. lots of love, a mother india 11/4/2007 8:20:13 AM