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CRY YOU TO LIFE, a poem by Meriki Raelene Fraser \ parkinson, Australia Other Baby, babies, infants Poems Other Good Bye Poems All Collections Dual Categories This Poet Countries Categories: Baby, babies, infants Poems & Good Bye Poetry Viewed 1639 times Author: Meriki Raelene Fraser \ parkinson, Australia Share Poem CRY YOU TO LIFE I pray to goddess gods and devils they refuse me any deal I sing songs and I cry and I stumble but still you don't become real if you'd just come to life when I held your clothes I'd sink in your eyes play games with your toes I'd savor your every scent inhale you with greedy breath make up for every moment spent that we will never spend Click to purchase Print 118236 0 Other Author Poems Self Indulgence Helter Skelter (my first sailboat) Dad Likes A Rum Recent Site Documents LIFE GOES ON! Joke by: Drsudarsan Prasad mosquito mission Blog by: Veena Khurana Camp here I come!!! Blog by: Alexandra Todorovic Table Tennis Blog 29\7\2010. Blog by: Paul Butters Awakened desire Blog by: Pattra Shuwaswat "The Color of Colors" Blog by: Marvenea Rainwater Breaking Free from the Past Short Story by: Chad Browne         If you like this poem, post a message below to the poet!   To Respond, enter a note and then click the "Post Response" button below   Your Response:   Your Name   Your Country       Here are the previous Messages left about this Poem From Comment about poem or author Response Country Response Added Meriki Fraser \ parkinson Thank you Alexandra, that is most kind. Australia 9/27/2008 3:27:17 AM Alexandra Ermoso Wow..very sad and touching. This poem's as great as its title. Philippines 9/27/2008 1:05:06 AM Meriki Fraser \ parkinson Just found your response Ros, thanks for your kindness. Last Wed was his 2nd birthday, & was very sad. Thanks for sharing him with me, I miss him so terribly. Australia 9/22/2008 7:57:51 PM ROS SHRAPNEL Meriki, no amount of time will ever fill or heal this great loss. A heartwrenching verse. God Bless. Australia 7/11/2008 9:22:24 AM Meriki Fraser \ parkinson Thank you Koyel, Micha & Marie for your kind support. Australia 7/3/2008 8:36:46 PM Marie Smith just found this, i think in writing it's a kinda grief counselling, not just for u but helps others. you know how i feel UK 7/3/2008 11:42:52 AM Michele Bossley Meriki, you have evoked such an aching in this poem. Your feeling...A sentiment that all of us pray we will never encounter. All I can say is Thankyou x Scotland 7/2/2008 9:51:17 AM koyel mitra nice,tidy poem .thanks India 6/11/2008 10:10:23 AM Meriki Fraser \ parkinson Thank you Mav, for reading & commenting. Australia 6/11/2008 3:35:33 AM Meriki Fraser \ parkinson Thanks Melissa & Brian for your kind & warm words. xxx Australia 5/29/2008 5:13:19 PM Melissa Grobler beautiful, very touching South Africa 5/29/2008 9:30:45 AM Brian O'neill Meriki-it is good to remind one of what life is really about. i love this poem-it is one of my favourites on voices.it will always be with me.your loss is great.irish mate N. Ireland 5/6/2008 7:18:28 PM Thank you Maverick! 1/11/2008 4:23:20 PM Thanks for the comments Erik. 1/7/2008 11:35:17 PM Erik Estabrook well to the point and solid, also so haunting U.S.A. 1/6/2008 6:29:25 PM Meriki Parkinson Again I thank you Julianne for your kind response. I'd still negotiate; if only I could. 10/30/2007 9:37:16 AM Julianne Absolutely wonderful Raelene, such amazing use of words. Australia 10/30/2007 2:39:25 AM Thanks. M* 10/14/2007 6:06:12 AM maverick simply beautiful australia 10/13/2007 10:48:23 PM Meriki Parkinson Dear Kanika, what a lovely name! Thanks for taking the time to comment on this verse!M* 10/11/2007 7:04:28 PM kanika khanna Very touching poem! I liked it a lot. india 10/11/2007 3:46:24 PM Meriki Parkinson thanks again 4 supporting my [heart] work. Australia 10/2/2007 7:19:19 PM Brian i love the raw emotion and dilema of this poem.thanks N.Ireland 10/2/2007 2:00:59 PM thanks for reading & commenting.M* 9/28/2007 6:48:57 PM Meriki Parkinson Dear Aldyth, thanks for your sweet words & thoughts.I,m holding on. M* Australia 9/24/2007 6:36:46 PM Aldyth Dearest Meriki, yes, our hearts weave and at least when we put our feelings into words our hearts feel release. But hold on to those dreams, you will one day be reunited.... Cape Town 9/24/2007 2:43:13 PM Meriki Parkinson Ta Aldyth, a broken heart weaves.M* Australia 9/22/2007 6:57:27 PM Aldyth Can only be written by a heart that has been touched. Beautifully woven... Cape Town 9/22/2007 2:20:06 PM lovely and so sad x 9/9/2007 10:48:06 AM Meriki Parkinson Thanks Colin, you are obviously a literary ,as I am not. Thank you so much for your lessons, please read all of my poetry, I'd appreciate YOUR feedback so. M* 9/8/2007 6:02:40 AM Meriki Parkinson Ta so much Thelma* 9/7/2007 8:32:59 AM thelma Dear Meriki A wonderful flow of words you have expressed so well in this poem many feelings of sadness. very emotional! Great Title. australia 9/7/2007 8:19:17 AM colin croke the rhythm in this really flows easy, i can see the influence of music and lyrical patterns in the meter like you mentioned in your profile. the first line is excellent, it just pulls you in to the emotion straight away. austalia 9/6/2007 11:38:15 PM   Send this poem to your Friends and Family           Use the following form to support the author by sending this poem to your friends, family and co-workers. 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