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did you rub off on me?, a poem by Gina Diaz, USA Other Daughter to Father Poems Other Teen Poems DUAL CATEGORY THIS POET COUNTRIES Categories: Daughter to Father Poems & Teen Poetry Viewed 6595 times Author: Gina Diaz, USA Share Poem did you rub off on me? I lost my respect for you far from today you made me cry mostly everyday I know we weren't an ordinary family you just made it clear never did i see such anger and betrayel from ear to ear In those days i tried to do anything to not be invisible to you i know you didn't care your angry and selfish you hurt our family emotionally and phisacally but what do you know like father like daughter i'm scared i saw it in you and now in me anger and deppresion words and deceppion i will not give you full credit i have my own secrets and demons things no one knows people who abused their power over me i'm fallin apart no one understands I sound sad and mad but all i needed was an appology just say sorry to me and slowly build my sanity maybe then i can be a lil better but now everything follows me and everyone who cared about me turned their back when i'm under attack with my emotions slowly loosing myself what's wrong with me am i really such a bad person did you rub off on me???? 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Blog by: Pattra Shuwaswat The Rockhill Cosmo and Her Butterfly-I Short Story by: Yarpei Shatsang         If you like this poem, post a message below to the poet!   To Respond, enter a note and then click the "Post Response" button below   Your Response:   Your Name   Your Country       Here are the previous Messages left about this Poem From Comment about poem or author Response Country Response Added dONtAiShA hARREll tHiS POEM REMiNdS ME Of My dAd ANd ME likE SERiOUSly NO liE UNitEd StAtES 2/1/2010 2:17:19 PM unknown i loved your poem its excaclly me n my dad ay vic 1/19/2009 8:07:18 AM Bianca Obinyan wow this poem has voice and its very emotional this is the type of poem that will get interperted in many different ways some good and some bad but u cant help that maybe the people who think that wat u wrote was wrong dont know how it feels how it feels to be abused thats why im not going to really criticize u cuz u were brought up in a harsh household all i can say is keep writing cuz ur good at it USA 9/20/2008 11:55:11 PM Gina Diaz k lots of ppl interprit things differently. tht's fine but i'ld lk 2 say 4 half my life i grew up in tht house hold with him in it. k he was very abussive. he had mager anger issues and was deppressed.now i c so much of tht in me.all the things i have done and been threw tht i wish upon no other. never has he owned up 2 all of tht and tht makes me bitter towards him. if he were to at least to alpologize i feel i would be able to kno tht a man lk tht does have remorse and is able to be a man and face tht. now he's not my only problem but i kno he's part of it and a little helps alot. now i get to c my mom struggle with her issues and it hurts me. bc she doesn't wnt any helpand well tht's another story but basixally ths wasn't a small fight we had. i mean me and my sister and my mom actually had to go to a womans shelter to run 4rm him. so maybe u can understand a lil y i wrote ths. USA 8/19/2008 8:30:44 PM lynzay i agree wiv belinda i felt like everything u said in the poem 2 my mum and dad, i regret the everything i said an done 2 hurt my mum and said 2 her, i felt like everything i did for her was not wot she wanted but now she has passed away i reslise everything she did and said was the best for me, she hurt me in ways she did not know an through that i feel worthless an not worth anything good that happens 2 me uk 8/11/2008 1:16:08 AM belinda Never blam anyone for you mistakes. Any anger you have with your parents fix them now regardless who stared the fight. You only have today because tommorow may never come. When its to late you will never get over anything 2/15/2008 10:56:27 PM Lamisha That was really deep and I enjoyed that a lot.I hope that you continue with your poetry because it has encouraged me to write even more..As a matter of fact, my new year's resolution is to write a poem everyday USA 12/30/2007 11:36:40 PM     Send this poem to your Friends and Family           Use the following form to support the author by sending this poem to your friends, family and co-workers. Each time that you forward this poem to another friend of yours, the poet will earn marketing credits to get their poem pages displayed even more on the Internet.    Your Name:    Friend's Email:    Note:         Have this poem read to you by one of our Poets! 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