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| Lee Emmett | thanks Peter and Linda, this is the product of one of those crazy flights of fancy! | Australia | 9/20/2009 9:48:16 AM |
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| Linda Terrell | Some weeks are like roller coaster rides. Hugh! Good one Lee. | USA | 9/19/2009 7:06:40 PM |
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| peter piper | i kinda like it | china | 9/19/2009 4:50:27 PM |
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| Lee Emmett | thanks Bob, had fun writing it ... | Australia | 8/4/2009 2:02:21 PM |
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| BOB | FANTASTIC | Aust | 8/4/2009 2:37:42 AM |
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| Lee Emmett | thanks Adam, glad you enjoy alliteration ... | Australia | 7/6/2009 10:11:50 PM |
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| adam | that was awsome | fort kent manie | 7/6/2009 11:02:43 AM |
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| Lee Emmett | thanks Miley Lynn, glad alliteration was useful ... | Australia | 7/3/2009 10:51:49 AM |
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| Miley Lynn Jones | This poem was very helpful for my project, thanks so much! I loved it very much I was catchie | United States of America | 7/3/2009 7:22:44 AM |
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| Lee Emmett | thanks Katie, enjoyed reading your alliteration! | Australia | 6/9/2009 10:21:38 AM |
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| Katie | I really love this poem, because for homework tonight I have to memlrize a poem, and I thought this one is just the right size, and I love alliteration. Do want to hear mine?
Tory takes trips
Makenzie makes macaroni
Caroline cares about countries
Rachel recycles
Sindy says "STOP!"
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Her big borther Ben bakes buns | United States of America | 6/8/2009 7:04:43 PM |
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| Lee Emmett | thanks again, Melissa, all the best with your writing, and with your assignment! | Australia | 5/26/2009 10:09:25 AM |
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| Melissa | Thanks Ms.Emmett! I really appreciate your advice on poetry. We are actually having a poetry assginment in class in which we write three poems and those poems have to include simile, metaphors and alliteration and the use of sensory lanuage. I am done assginment but I just hope that I am successful in this assignment :)
| Canada | 5/26/2009 12:39:20 AM |
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| Lee Emmett | thanks Melissa, not everything written works out brilliantly, by any stretch of the imagination ... sometimes poems seem to write themselves ... other times need to work a bit harder ... recommend writing every day, and carrying a notebook for those special moments of inspiration ... usually write to work out an emotion, or record a fleeting impression ... all the best with your poetry ... | Australia | 5/14/2009 1:21:44 AM |
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| Melissa | Very unique and Thorougly
written poetry I truly enjoyed reading your poetry. The use of Alliteration is very unique as I mention before
I hope I can become a successfull poet like you in future
| Canada | 5/13/2009 11:15:18 PM |
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| Lee Emmett | thanks emz, glad you like alliteration ... and will look out for that other person ... | Australia | 4/22/2009 11:20:34 PM |
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| emz | this is kewl!!!!! i really like it.....have you heard of emmett cullen in Twilight???? omg yall are like the only people i know with that name! i love it!!!!! | usa | 4/22/2009 8:26:00 PM |
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| Lee Emmett | thanks Melissa, you're very welcome to use it for your alliteration assignment ... | Australia | 4/20/2009 9:59:25 AM |
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| Melissa | hey i was wondering if i could use your poem for my alliteration project
i love how it says "Monday morming moaning" it is so true | USA | 4/20/2009 8:46:58 AM |
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| Lee Emmett | thanks Jane, glad the alliteration was helpful ... | Australia | 4/16/2009 8:55:19 PM |
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| Jane D. |
Great poem for teaching alliteration to students in sixth grade!
Some of them are realling getting into it :) | USA | 4/16/2009 10:12:52 AM |
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| Lee Emmett | thanks Cheyenne, glad you found this alliteration amusing ... | Australia | 4/12/2009 5:35:48 AM |
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| cheyenne | this is a very funny poem and i used it for my poetry project. | U.S. | 4/11/2009 3:42:49 PM |
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| Lee Emmett | thanks Hayley, glad the alliteration was handy for project ... | Australia | 3/30/2009 8:20:17 AM |
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| Hayley | This poem was very helpful for my project, thanks so much! | United States | 3/29/2009 12:23:36 PM |
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| Lee Emmett | thanks Andrea, we sometimes call it Mondayitis! | Australia | 3/24/2009 10:26:46 PM |
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| andrea | wow nice thats real cool | us | 3/24/2009 5:25:40 PM |
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| Lee Emmett | thanks Spankie, alliteration is fun to write ... | Australia | 2/24/2009 7:27:59 PM |
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| spankie | very true, very funny | Zimbabwai | 2/24/2009 3:31:14 PM |
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| Lee Emmett | thanks Nick, bumpy, alliterative path of a week ... | Australia | 2/24/2009 6:42:58 AM |
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| Nick | Good very true for my life | U.S. | 2/22/2009 8:10:09 PM |
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| Lee Emmett | thanks Eloise, there seem to be other people who write poetry who have the same name as mine ... I am a woman, 57 years old, Australian ... | Australia | 2/22/2009 3:32:00 AM |
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| eloise | this was great like many of lee emmett's poems. iv got many books about him. such a great fan of his work! | united states | 2/21/2009 6:39:26 PM |
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| eloise | love lee bennett hopkins's poems! they make my day! | united states | 2/21/2009 6:34:30 PM |
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| Lee Emmett | thank Anonymous, alliteration can be fun to write ... | Australia | 2/11/2009 7:09:12 AM |
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| I'm learning about alliterations in school today and i looked up alliteration poems.just wanted to say ,great poem | | 2/10/2009 7:42:44 PM |
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| Lee Emmett | glad you approve, Gavin ... | Australia | 2/5/2009 6:06:04 PM |
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| Gavin tat | good | USA | 2/5/2009 9:50:11 AM |
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| Lee Emmett | thanks Hema, ups and downs of the week in an alliteration ... it was fun to write ... | Australia | 2/3/2009 8:18:23 PM |
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| Hema Ravi | Lovely alliteration in this verse, Lee, thanks for sharing. | India | 2/3/2009 8:47:34 AM |
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| Lee Emmett | thanks Mon, sometimes poems seem to spin out of mind like fairy floss! | Australia | 2/3/2009 6:20:42 AM |
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| mon | i love the way you got wonderful words for a single letter | california | 2/2/2009 10:51:20 PM |
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| mon | you got that right monday morning always starts with the moaning of realisation of school | california | 2/2/2009 10:49:39 PM |
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| Lee Emmett | thanks Julian, you are welcome to use any of my poems for your projects ... | Australia | 1/23/2009 7:25:30 PM |
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| Lee Emmett | thanks Julian, you are welcome to use the poem for your project ... | Australia | 1/23/2009 7:20:50 PM |
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| Julian | love the ending
"monday morning mad"
If you don't mind, I'd like to use this for a school project. I'll give you credit. | USA | 1/22/2009 3:55:31 PM |
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| Lee Emmett | thanks Christine, every so often the opeing line of an alliteration comes to mind ... | Australia | 11/21/2008 7:54:51 AM |
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| Christine | this was nice i like it you are very good at writing | U.S | 11/19/2008 4:34:54 PM |
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| Lee Emmett | thans anon and Saba, glad you like it ... | Australia | 11/18/2008 5:28:26 PM |
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| saba | this is a cool cat | u.s | 11/18/2008 9:16:40 AM |
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