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FUNNEL OF EVIL, a poem by Marcia Schechinger, USA Other Nature Poems Other Religious, Christian, Jewish, Islam, Baptist, etc. Poems DUAL CATEGORY THIS POET COUNTRIES Categories: Nature Poems & Religious, Christian, Jewish, Islam, Baptist, etc. Poetry Viewed 1941 times Author: Marcia Schechinger, USA Share Poem FUNNEL OF EVIL Smoke blue clouds decline as ash from doomed sinners are banished from heaven They sift and smolder smothering the earth Winds sing in howling voice, the holocaust of choices made, cursing the Lord for their sins Victims on earth feel their leaded toes as they frost burn the world with cold remorse killing spirits with dread So dark their souls evil spins in ears all growth stops the world subsides Buds, birds, humans cling to their caves under earths warm flesh mud, clay or mortar, as they pass We pray for light but the cleansing continues until the last seepage of sewer spills to hell and life is renewed The funnel of evil has gone to its abyss we again live in the light of another day to choose our own destiny Click to purchase Print 146209 0 Other Author Poems FIRST NIGHT WITHOUT YOU SNUGGLE TIME FOR NEWER SKIES Recent Site Documents What type of Valentine do you wish to have? 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Just a little duvet to let individuals know it is never too late to change.:) Sorry I missed your comments, they always mean so much to me. USA 6/27/2009 10:22:43 PM Ovie Olori A magnificient piece written with excellent use of imagery, the picture is sombre and honestly painted with well fitted colours Nigeria 5/26/2009 8:27:10 PM Marcia Schechinger Janet you are too funny. Only scarey if your are among the evil ash (tee hee). Thank you for the lovely response, I am sure a heart as good as yours has nothing to worry about. :) USA 1/14/2009 2:12:40 PM Janet Psaila I'll be good! You scared me to death Marcia - very dark! Excellent poem Australia 1/14/2009 11:31:50 AM Marcia Schechinger Thanks Lee, Thelma and Kanika I am entering this in other competitions so your comments are greatly appreciated! How do you think I feel Thelma, I wrote the silly thing at bedtime - now even I, the writer, am afraid of my sins and going to hell :) USA 1/14/2009 8:24:48 AM Marcia Schechinger Thanks Ros! your comments are always lovely. Now that I have scared everyone from sin, I do hope everybody lives and explores just looks at a stormy day differently because of my verse. The hearts here on voices will never be in the ash of clouds, they are too lovely. :) USA 1/14/2009 8:11:53 AM Kanika Khanna Amazing poem with an efective conclusion.. Thanks for explaining. India 1/14/2009 6:31:21 AM Thelma Zaracostas Wonderful imagery, dark yet with light shining through, glad it isn't my bedtime Marcia! Australia 1/14/2009 5:55:34 AM Lee Emmett strong metaphor, and imagery ... terrific poem, Marcia ... Australia 1/14/2009 2:32:50 AM ROS SHRAPNEL Good Lord! Fabulous imagery of hell on earth Marcia! Wonderful write my friend. Thank goodness there is chance of cleansing and renewal of blemished souls. Cheers. Australia 1/14/2009 12:03:51 AM Marcia Schechinger Thanks Koyel, so you better be good so as not to become the gathering of ashes, that smoke blue cloud, descending to hell :) Pretty heavy as it is time for bedtime stories in the US -yikes! :) USA 1/13/2009 11:27:39 PM Koyel Mitra Very lovely poem Marcia,from you the master of imagery. India 1/13/2009 11:03:39 PM     Send this poem to your Friends and Family           Use the following form to support the author by sending this poem to your friends, family and co-workers. Each time that you forward this poem to another friend of yours, the poet will earn marketing credits to get their poem pages displayed even more on the Internet.    Your Name:    Friend's Email:    Note:         Have this poem read to you by one of our Poets! 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