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TRUTH, a poem by Satheesan Rangorath, India Other Not Categorized Poems Other Poems DUAL CATEGORY THIS POET COUNTRIES Categories: Not Categorized Poems Viewed 26 times Author: Satheesan Rangorath, India   Poem TRUTH Holding and being held, hands are tied one way or other. Many hold together, as parents, friends n’ relatives, lovers and comrades. Human chains built by hand hooks. Some where in the rush, all leaves you alone. There is none to hold hands, all part their ways some how. Thousands of shake hands blur, in memories. A sequence of scenes relay, until eyes retires into deep sleep. None lasted for ever. All that holdings are un-held. Emptiness find its way to graveyard. There is one held you together all through life. hands invisible! _________ Click to purchase Print 160897 0 Other Author Poems MOONLIT IMAGES PENANCE OF WISDOM YOUR WARM SMILE Recent Site Documents I SHALL BE MISSING VOICES Event Announcement by: Khadera Nargis Explaining the Emotions Blog by: ROHIT SAPRA What have I learned.? Blog by: Melissa Tom Adventure one of .. Blog by: Pattra Shuwaswat the gift of broken memories(PART:1 ) Short Story by: jessica r. Melvin and the Princess Book Review by: Linda Terrell The Unbeliever of Renn Short Story by: Anne carly Abad Voices Book Blog by: Janet Psaila A SIGN FROM GOD Blog by: James Thompson alone Blog by: Stephanie Roberts         If you like this poem, post a message below to the poet!   To Respond, enter a note and then click the "Post Response" button below   Your Response:   Your Name   Your Country       Here are the previous Messages left about this Poem From Comment about poem or author Response Country Response Added Satheesan Rangorath Thank You Eizabeth Thanks for reading my poem again and kind comments posted dear friend. Thank you Greetings Sathee India 11/4/2009 12:36:13 PM Elizabeth Olesen Hi, dear friend, it is only lately, I saw your last remark. Thanks that you received my response without feeling offended. I think I like the idea of holding that comes from the beginning to the end. "Emptiness finds its way to the graveyard" is a nice poetic insight from your side. I like very much the ending, the presence of the hands invisible,which after all, have held us all. And anyone may call it truth or give it another name like God. Thanks for sharing. Denmark 10/29/2009 3:05:36 PM Satheesan Rangorath Elizabeth Olesen Thank You Elizabeth. You are very kind to read and comment on my poem. I agree You are right I myself was not satisfied with its aesthetics. Now I Improved a bit, but I am not sure It is up to the mark. Kindly read agian. Greetings Sathee India 10/25/2009 1:32:19 PM Elizabeth Olesen Very good insight being expressed here, Satheesan. I think you need to read it again to find if there is something you miss. You have been very excellent in your write-ups. I think this piece needs ýour second look. But the content with the use of imagery is marvelous. Denmark 10/25/2009 5:18:33 AM       Send this poem to your Friends and Family           Use the following form to support the author by sending this poem to your friends, family and co-workers. Each time that you forward this poem to another friend of yours, the poet will earn marketing credits to get their poem pages displayed even more on the Internet.    Your Name:    Friend's Email:    Note:         Have this poem read to you by one of our Poets! Rate this Poem 1 - Average 2 3 4 5 - Award Winner Votes: 1      Average Rating: 4      points: 4 HELP THIS AUTHOR OUT BY COPYING THE FOLLOWING HTML CODE INTO ANY WEBPAGE <a href = "http://www.voicesnet.org/displayonepoem.aspx?poemid=160897">Click here to visit VoicesNet.com to read the poem called "TRUTH" by Satheesan Rangorath, India</a>