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| Anthony dela Torre | I totally love your poem. I can relate to it, because when I was a kid, I used to believe that there is something under my bed who will get me when I'm asleep, but then I realized it was just my imagination and that I'm only scaring myself. very good job for you... I love it! | Philippines | 2/1/2010 11:57:12 PM |
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| Bethany | haha that's funny. I think I'm definitely going to choose this as my narrative poem for my Acting assignment. | USA | 2/1/2010 8:46:36 PM |
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| Destiny | i loved it thanxx so much | piedmont.alabama | 2/1/2010 1:42:24 PM |
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| Jeremy | Awesome | Usa | 11/23/2009 11:14:48 AM |
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| Jeremy | Awesome I needed a narrative poem for my English assignment and this helps. Awesome dude. | Usa | 11/23/2009 11:13:40 AM |
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| asia | i luved it...its goin in my skool notebook!!! | usa | 10/29/2009 12:54:00 PM |
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| susie | nice poem i liked it hope to be ale to use it for my narratie projects
peace | maryland | 9/28/2009 12:30:49 PM |
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| susie | i like the poem i hope to be able to us it for my narrative project | maryland | 9/28/2009 12:29:33 PM |
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| RFEGRG | AWSOMENESSS!!!!!!!! | EGREGRGE | 8/27/2009 12:55:00 AM |
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| kate | nice poems kate my name is kate too so we might be familiar good to see something from u | australia | 8/26/2009 5:52:28 AM |
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| ravi | yo??????????????????????????it.is.exellent!!!!!!!!!!!!
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| sri.lanka | 8/9/2009 11:26:26 AM |
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| ravi | Exellent | sri.lanka | 8/5/2009 11:15:14 AM |
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| abcdefghijklmnopqrstuvwxyz | is this a narrative poem if it is it rulz and i am going to use it for exams | abcdefghijklmnopqrstuvwxyz | 7/26/2009 2:12:08 AM |
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| Samuel | Thats wicked.. i wish i could write like that | Australia | 7/20/2009 5:39:40 AM |
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| Nikki | This is very cute!
If you don't mind, I will be using this poem for my Poetry Book in my English 10 class. | United States of America | 6/3/2009 6:58:29 PM |
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| jack | ver very good | united states | 5/29/2009 10:16:29 AM |
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| jack | hmm this was pretty good!! | united states | 5/29/2009 10:16:08 AM |
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| erika | funny | united states | 5/10/2009 9:15:25 PM |
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| Dracula | Veell vis vas very vood, i liked vit very vuch | Translyvania | 5/7/2009 7:07:40 PM |
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| Oliskuhh. | This Is Very Good. | America | 5/1/2009 6:12:42 PM |
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| Sofia | This is a cute poem ^^ | united states | 4/30/2009 7:01:45 PM |
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| hey b hey hey i love this poem | | 4/24/2009 2:29:00 PM |
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| Author | UNDER MY BED...
It’s that time again, that time that I dread,
That nerve-racking time, when I have to go to bed,
Mum tucks in the covers, “hope the bedbugs don’t bite”,
But I know there are worse things that lurk ‘round at night.
There’s a monster, you see, hiding down there,
That horrible mutant with a red eyed stare,
It hovers in the shadows ‘till the day is done,
Its toothy mouth smirks at the sight of the setting sun.
Mum comforts me, as my face turns to white,
“It’s okay sweetie. Everything’s alright.”
She turns on my night light and closes the door,
“Don’t you worry about those bedbugs anymore.”
We’re all alone now - it’s just the monster and me,
I bet it’s licking its lips now with sheer ecstasy,
I pull up the blankets to cover my head,
To hide me from that creature that lives under my bed.
I have a sudden thought, what if I catch him first?
So I creep out of the blankets, expecting the worst,
But he doesn’t emerge so I bend down to see,
That strange, frightening creature, that’s waiting for me.
I hold the sheet tight to invade his lair,
I jerk it straight back, but I can’t see much down there,
I find a few lint balls, some toys and a tack,
But the monster’s not there tonight, I guess he’s just slack! | United States of Amerdica | 4/24/2009 10:49:17 AM |
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| Pamela | Don't ever change...
pammy like | Canada | 4/3/2009 8:59:39 AM |
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| Tyree | Hey what a great poem, keep them coming man, again great job. | America | 4/1/2009 11:00:17 PM |
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| Stevie | Sweet i made a poem a couple years ago just like it good job | America | 4/1/2009 6:38:09 AM |
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| paul stannard | nice flowing poem with wit good work ! | UK | 3/29/2009 8:07:29 AM |
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| Dan | Very nice poem. | United States | 3/25/2009 8:29:21 PM |
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| lagia brewer | i really lyke this poem its really good hope to read some more | charoltte | 3/23/2009 7:19:48 PM |
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| bob | awsome poem!!!!!!!! i like the ending! | idk | 3/3/2009 9:44:01 PM |
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| awesomeness! | Amazing poem!!! definately one of the best ones I've ever read!!! YOu rock cool dude!!! Very helpful for my assignment. | USA | 3/3/2009 6:11:18 PM |
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| Linda Terrell | Kate, Lovely childrens poem..I recall the fear of bedtime as a child this poem hits the nail on the head, so to speak...I like it. might read it to my grandaughet....Good job. Thanks. | USA | 2/27/2009 10:22:11 AM |
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| -jenny. | nice dudee
can i use that for my speak out?
thx | thailand | 2/27/2009 9:59:39 AM |
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| Garrett | lol im using it for a project 2 if thats aight
but yea, very nice poem | USA-DEM STARS AND STRIPES BABY! | 2/25/2009 2:52:59 PM |
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| Hi | Nice poem!!!!!!!! It's great! | USA | 2/25/2009 6:04:01 AM |
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| Hi | Nice!!!!!!!!!!!!! It rhymes and I'm using this for my homework assignment! | USA | 2/25/2009 6:03:38 AM |
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| Janet Psaila | this is great - everybody had this fear as a kid! | Australia | 2/24/2009 10:46:41 PM |
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| Jonathan | lol I'm using this for a project too! Hope you don't mind. I needed a narrative poem | U>S>A BABY! | 2/24/2009 9:01:26 PM |
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| Mary | Thanks i needed a narritve poem | Cnanada | 2/11/2009 3:50:40 PM |
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| Jp | coooooooool
| U.S.A U.S.A U.S.A | 2/10/2009 12:55:03 PM |
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| Mauricio M. | AMAZIMG POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol its very creative and id like to hear more :P | Fl. orlando | 2/10/2009 10:04:21 AM |
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| Mauricio M. | nice its very creative :] and its an amazimy poem its funny and lik ei said creative :P | Fl. orlando | 2/10/2009 9:59:18 AM |
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| Student-067 |
hey man im gonna use this 4 a project if u dont mind | IP II IL IL II IP II INI IE IS | 2/5/2009 7:46:05 AM |
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| Stina | Nice poem! I enjoyed how the rhyme scheme flowed together with the words. | Germany | 1/31/2009 10:23:51 PM |
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| Thelma Zaracostas | Wow! so many responses to your poem Kate, had to have another read, look forward to more of your of your work soon! | Australia | 1/13/2009 5:25:22 PM |
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| S0PH13 | Hey,
Awsome poem! u shud du sum more coz i really enjoyed it and i will use it for my english homewrk where we have to compare 2 poems and urs is 1 of dem! u r soooooooooooo talented i wud luv 2 read sum mor. ciya!!!!!!!! | 3NGL4ND | 1/13/2009 3:50:39 PM |
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| meki | u rock hard! (^.^)
| united states | 1/12/2009 9:34:05 PM |
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| Lea Pea according to kaitlin | no mosters tonite!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol | usa | 12/30/2008 1:59:18 PM |
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| dyona davis | this is a very good poem and also a funny poem.i liked the different lines that you used it was very interesting.you did a very good job on this poem how did you come up with such a good poem. | new york | 12/15/2008 4:31:32 PM |
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| dyona davis | I loved your poem it was very interesting and funny | new york | 12/15/2008 4:26:43 PM |
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