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IT WAS YOU, a poem by Cierra Elizabeth Foy, USA Other Narrative Poems Other Teen Poems DUAL CATEGORY THIS POET COUNTRIES Categories: Narrative Poems & Teen Poetry Viewed 6086 times Author: Cierra Elizabeth Foy, USA Share Poem IT WAS YOU I was living in a dream And I hoped I'd never wake Now I'm living in a nightmare And it's more than I can take What once was just a fantasy Blossomed into something real I had it all: love, innocence, joy All of which you had to steal You'll never know how you hurt me You'll never understand the pain you caused You'll never know the things I gambled How I paid the price. Now everything's lost And all because of you. Click to purchase Print 61046 0 Other Author Poems Recent Site Documents What type of Valentine do you wish to have? Blog by: Mukeshkumar Raval Just Among Friends (A24) Blog by: Chris Johnson ARE LARGE PHARMACUTICAL COMPANIES PLAYING SCROOGE Blog by: Marcia Schechinger Code Red! (A tale of a media man) Short Story by: Edgar Eslit CONGRATULATORY SPEECH Blog by: Dowell Oba finally... Short Story by: bahar sarafrazi Why I Write About Monsters Blog by: Kristine Trudeau Wonder of Wonders Blog by: Rajaram Ramachandran One upon a time.. Blog by: Pattra Shuwaswat The Rockhill Cosmo and Her Butterfly-I Short Story by: Yarpei Shatsang         If you like this poem, post a message below to the poet!   To Respond, enter a note and then click the "Post Response" button below   Your Response:   Your Name   Your Country       Here are the previous Messages left about this Poem From Comment about poem or author Response Country Response Added Hannah Very good. I really liked it. Really deep. Great job. USA 5/28/2009 11:09:03 AM shaiundrea dhis was so deep stuff 2 me and i really lyk dhis 2 thumps up U.S.A 4/29/2009 6:46:36 PM Ashley Wonderful...I can relate to this poem United States 3/20/2009 11:15:38 AM Samantha Lee Cahill-Davison Wow, that reminds me of what my ex-boyfriend did to me. I love it! United States 3/19/2009 12:42:03 AM trinity wow goodpoem wit such depth n meanin...keep up th fab work..yeh? south africa 3/4/2009 4:00:16 PM Tanya Brown great very true Clermont Fl. 2/26/2009 10:02:32 PM Very true indeed 2/26/2009 10:01:37 PM Blair i think its great but just alittle bit more feelings into it ,that you feel like crying , you know what i mean , th thank you united stated 2/19/2009 6:39:03 PM delilah i can relate. guys are clueless when it comes to knowing how much they hurt you. uas 10/1/2008 4:46:43 PM jesus it's a good poem so where does my responses go now usa 6/3/2008 7:47:12 PM jesus where is my responses going usa 6/3/2008 7:46:52 PM my name is jesus that was a good poem though is this really what happneed? usa 6/3/2008 7:45:51 PM JESUS great poem USA 6/3/2008 7:44:34 PM JESUS ASHELY WHAT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT USA 6/3/2008 7:44:04 PM Unknown I love this. Kind of simple, yet not too sappy. I can relate. USA 5/13/2008 8:59:21 PM Sukainah Choonara i like ur poem, i can so relate... but things only get better! :) South Africa 5/13/2008 2:25:49 PM Melissa Andrea Nelson this was a very touching poem i love it America 4/7/2008 4:03:27 PM Cecillya Dillon This Poem is SO true I totally Koow what you mean!!!!!!!11 Bluefield VA 3/11/2008 10:23:41 AM ANNONyMUS. i lOVE diZZ POEM! iTS TRUE. STUPidd GUyS DNT kNOE H0W MUCH dEy HURT yEW. && dA FAiRyTAlE dOES SOMETiME COME TRUE. ZiCkk POEM <3 iN My OWN WORld. 2/25/2008 8:43:39 PM cordia i love this poem i think it has a good reason to it and it has a great meanign ecspessialy to the teens in this world because imone of them right now usa 9/9/2007 6:21:37 PM ashley is this about a hearst brake or you geting beat? usa 6/3/2007 7:16:06 PM     Send this poem to your Friends and Family           Use the following form to support the author by sending this poem to your friends, family and co-workers. Each time that you forward this poem to another friend of yours, the poet will earn marketing credits to get their poem pages displayed even more on the Internet.    Your Name:    Friend's Email:    Note:         Have this poem read to you by one of our Poets! Rate this Poem 1 - Average 2 3 4 5 - Award Winner Not Rated Yet HELP THIS AUTHOR OUT BY COPYING THE FOLLOWING HTML CODE INTO ANY WEBPAGE <a href = "http://www.voicesnet.org/displayonepoem.aspx?poemid=61046">Click here to visit VoicesNet.com to read the poem called "IT WAS YOU" by Cierra Elizabeth Foy, USA</a>