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MISSING MY BROTHER, a poem by Yasmin Al-Ayech Barquin, Canada

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Yasmin Al-Ayech Barquin, Canada

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MISSING MY BROTHER

I was dying,
But you helped me survive.
Just being with you,
Kept me alive.

My life has ended now,
For you are so far away from me.
Head high I tried to live,
But I just couldn’t handle the pain.

I was crying,
But you killed me by leaving.
Just thinking of you,
Kept the pain away for a while.

My life depended now,
For you not to be away from me.
Up high the mountain I tried to survive,
But I just can’t life without you.

I just can’t live without your sweet love.

©Copyright “06-05-02”

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BiG SiSI do like this poem....my brother and I are in foster care....I have never been without my brother he is 14 and I am 15....The other day he was put in a different foster care.... I miss him so much it hurts ........But i know i will see him again and so will you with your brother...Again i like this poem its really true.....United States of America2/5/2010 12:38:00 PM
teigani miss my brother who passed away 2 years ago :( good poem.australia1/24/2010 5:55:31 AM
DheeruawesomeIndia1/15/2010 7:36:23 AM
ruththis is a great poem the best ive ever reid that goes to a brother its great short and sweet.... =] united states of america 11/30/2009 11:21:18 PM
tashaur poem is so nice 4 a brother may allah bless u.england9/2/2009 5:17:55 PM
jothi moorthyi to miss my brother ... india8/13/2009 9:21:53 AM
meghai am smallest sis of my bro & sweetest for him so he loves me alot. i'll surely send poem to him &i am sure by reading it he would start me loving more.thanksINDIA7/26/2009 6:41:03 AM
meghathisssssss poem is for allll borthers who is not there brothers or sistersINDIA7/26/2009 6:35:05 AM
Laura RainesYo this is a good poem and i turned it into a rap check it To:Brandon Raines I have been missing you all the months you were gone and i have been crying up storms and making things go wrong and i have been praying to god thinking you`ll come back so i can feel safe and i was dying but you helped me survive and just being with you kept me alive just thinking of you kept the pain away for a whileBrockton,Massachusetts5/20/2009 8:26:14 PM
TUNAwow! this poem speaks about how i feel with my own to brothers thankx this is going to my two big brothers I LOVE AND MISS YOU JOSH AND BRANDON UNITED STATES OF AMERICA5/3/2009 7:32:41 PM
diana zapateroxemotionz r alwayz good but thiz wuz gudhidalgo5/1/2009 3:01:46 PM
diana zapateroxi liked it but give it more emotionz 2 make me cry plz!5/1/2009 2:59:41 PM
jesica heartI can relate to this poem , i miss my brother so much, why did he have to pass away he was really kind and out going , but still its a nice poem and i luv it.usa4/25/2009 9:09:34 PM
passionthis poem is sadd but i like it!here and there.4/15/2009 11:24:26 AM
Amythat was emotional. I lost a twin brother and i never met him this poem touches me. the author is a great poetuk1/20/2009 2:55:02 PM
Amythat was emotional. I lost a twin brother and i never met him this poem touches meuk1/20/2009 2:53:13 PM
Heather rose beckthat was very thoughtfull of any one to make this up out of the clear blue like i do my poems. my brother lives in tascaloosa and i miss him so very much and this so reminds me of him all my familys falling apart...america9/24/2008 3:01:36 PM
Heather rose beckthats very thoughtful for any one to actually write somthing like that. i miss my brother and im going through some stuff and i want to see my brother. He lives in tascaloosa. i write poems 2...love heather beck...america9/24/2008 2:59:24 PM
Iris BarquinHi Yasmin. My name is Iris Barquin & I left message regarding your poem back on the 11th of April in 2007. I live in the U.S.A. & the time I wrote to you I believe was 11:39 p.m. I thought your poem was great. Well, today I just so happened to Google my last name & I saw that my name was on a website so I clicked on it & to my amazement I was back on your page! I thought that was great cause I also saw that you replied to my message. Well, you asked what my background was & here it is...my mother is full Mexican & my Father is 1/2 Mexican & 1/2 Spanish. My great-grandparents came to Mexico from Spain & that is where my Grandfather & father were born. So yea I guess that makes my Dad 1/2 & 1/2 Spanish & Mexican. Unfortunately I don't know anything about my ancestors from Spain. I did however try & do some investigating of my own but I haven't gotten anywhere with it yet. So, what is your background & do you still live in Spain? Oh! I would love to visit Spain one day...I hear it is beautiful! By the way, thank you for commenting back from before ;0)!United States of America9/17/2008 5:43:31 PM
this is so beutifull I just lost my brother and im dieieng to survive without him. Emmarentia South Africa9/10/2008 8:21:58 AM
FriendI know a person living in Spain named "Ayech Al-Ayech Barquin. He lives in Gran Canaria, Canary Islands, Spain.Spain9/4/2008 9:41:44 AM
AshifaIt is awesome dearIndia9/2/2008 7:51:59 AM
Yasmin Al-Ayech BarquinIf you ever come back on this page, i would like to thank everyone who has read and commented my poem. It is a beautiful yet sentimental and personal thing to be able to write and share with others. I am honoured to know that i have filled with emotions many people and i am glad that my words give inspiration to others. I couldn't ask for more. I will be writing more shortly. Until then.Canada8/21/2008 3:06:57 PM
matt lenglemy only brothers funeral is this friday. and im dying reading these poems trying to find one that might say what im looking forus8/20/2008 4:49:01 PM
Samantha GaskinsThis is a realy good poem! My Brother passed away and March the 10 this year, would be a year for him and my cusin to be gone! I miss them both sooo much my brother always inspired me to do my best in everything i do or did! I miss him so dearly much!!!!!!U.S4/28/2008 11:20:20 AM
LiyahHi, Yasmin your poem really touch my heart. The only thing is that my brother has not passed, but he's incarcerated for a crime he did not commit. My family and I are going through a lot now. He's been in there now almost 2 years. They keep cancelling his trial. But. tomorrow we will finally find out what they are going to do with him. I miss my brother so much and I hope and pray that things go well. I miss his jokes he use to tell me. He has a daughter that he will probably not see anymore. I ask not only you, but others as well to say a prayer for my family. My heart goes out to you as well. With God on our side it will get better.Wilson4/27/2008 11:03:14 AM
CHITRAREALLY I WAS TAKEN ABACK, I MISSSSSSSS MY ANNA SOOOO MUCH!!! I'M DAMN SURE THIS POEM WILL MAKE HIM TO DROP A TEAR THINKING OF ME!!!!!INDIA3/25/2008 12:47:49 PM
Ambrethis poem made me cry the first time i read it. my brother ran away from home recently and that's exactly how i feel.USA2/28/2008 9:31:34 PM
Fallen AngelHey this poem was tight and I loved it write more.U,S2/1/2008 1:08:21 PM
Fallen AngelHey this poem is tight I like the whole thing!!U,S2/1/2008 1:07:38 PM
NellieThis is real deep abuot your brother its very very emotional to me i Feel the same way 4real no kidding my brothers inital is KRJ i miss very badunited states1/28/2008 11:39:11 AM
Tynealle I loved this poem about your brousa1/26/2008 5:40:49 PM
LeeBeautiful, loving, expressive poem ... thanks for sharing it with us.Aus12/16/2007 7:40:25 AM
BettyThank you for this poem. My brother passed away 12/27/06. I missed him so much. He had some mental issues and I always looked after him. He really loved his little sister. Your poem is very nice.United States12/15/2007 9:46:38 PM
Chaitra SharmaHats off to u!!!! m really touched. . .cos i love my bro. . .infact lost one. . .thank u so muck for such an intense feeling shown. . .India11/13/2007 8:35:28 AM
ashlyn That touches me very much i have a brother in Iraq and it realtes usa10/14/2007 8:56:58 PM
Yasmin AABThanks for your comments! (for Iris Barquin) I come from Spain, what is your background!? Maybe we have way back ansestors!!! Let me knowCanada10/4/2007 3:08:06 PM
RAUL VALDERETHAT WAS BEAUTIFUL! VERY IN DEPTH WRITING... THERE IS A SPELLING ERROR. "I just can't LIVE without you." YOUR WELCOME!PERU10/1/2007 2:01:28 PM
Iris BarquinYasmin, Hello. My name is Iris. When I read your poem my heart was racing. First of all I want to let you know that this poem is so beautiful and it really touched my heart. Secondly, I wasn't sure if I was dreaming when I saw your name and what your poem was about because we both have this tragedy in common. My brother also died. He passed away on July 30, 2006.He was only 37 years old. The second thing that got my attention is that we both have the same last name. My last name is also Barquin. I just thought that that was pretty weird that we both had brothers that passed away and our last names are the same. I live in California and I don't know anyone else that shares my last name besides my cousins from my Dad's brother. Thank you for sharing this poem with us and I truly appreciate it. It is very beautiful. WOW!United States of America4/11/2007 11:39:56 PM
Yasmin Al-Ayech BarquinThank you Ashley for taking the time to read and comment my poem!Canada3/8/2007 1:29:30 PM
ashleythis is a great and a sweet poemny3/7/2007 6:19:37 PM

 

 
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