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WHAT IF?, a poem by Keneshia Marie Laarz, Canada Other Dark Poems, Depressing Poems, Death Poems Other Uncle Poems DUAL CATEGORY THIS POET COUNTRIES Categories: Dark Poems, Depressing Poems, Death Poems & Uncle Poetry Viewed 6065 times Author: Keneshia Marie Laarz, Canada Share Poem WHAT IF? What if we got a second chance?, to turn back the clock and re-enhance?, go back, re-sing the song, correct the mistakes that we made wrong, would life be so much better that way?, would he have lived for just one more day?, here are the questions we ask each other, what if his life had gone on forever?, would he have changed and come back home?, would I still be so alone?, I'd help him correct the mistakes, he made along the way, if he could just live for one more day. Click to purchase Print 65148 0 Other Author Poems Recent Site Documents What type of Valentine do you wish to have? Blog by: Mukeshkumar Raval Just Among Friends (A24) Blog by: Chris Johnson ARE LARGE PHARMACUTICAL COMPANIES PLAYING SCROOGE Blog by: Marcia Schechinger Code Red! (A tale of a media man) Short Story by: Edgar Eslit CONGRATULATORY SPEECH Blog by: Dowell Oba finally... Short Story by: bahar sarafrazi Why I Write About Monsters Blog by: Kristine Trudeau Wonder of Wonders Blog by: Rajaram Ramachandran One upon a time.. Blog by: Pattra Shuwaswat The Rockhill Cosmo and Her Butterfly-I Short Story by: Yarpei Shatsang         If you like this poem, post a message below to the poet!   To Respond, enter a note and then click the "Post Response" button below   Your Response:   Your Name   Your Country       Here are the previous Messages left about this Poem From Comment about poem or author Response Country Response Added keneshia laarz Thanks so much everyone! canada 7/17/2009 2:25:30 AM Mark Ryan Waldrop absolutely beautiful bravo United States of America 6/17/2009 9:30:58 AM sarah ii love thiis poem iit briings tears to my eyes. my uncle diied because he made the wrong mistakes wiith the wrong people when he was here. ii miiss hiim very much.he diied recently actually. thiis iis the best poem iive read today.. thank you alot!!. usa 1/2/2009 7:48:07 AM Faton Ratkoceri I gave you a five :) UK 9/17/2008 11:27:50 AM Keneshia Laarz Thank you all. Canada 9/17/2008 10:34:02 AM Keneshia Laarz Thank you all very much. It really does mean alot to me. Canada 9/17/2008 10:33:20 AM Kelsey I really like your poem Canada 6/15/2008 10:58:09 AM Cheryl Very good poem. I liked it very much. USA 5/2/2008 2:40:02 AM Kirsten This was a great poem.. this really makes me think about my uncles that die a while back it's well writen and a wonderful poem!<33 U.S.A. 10/25/2007 5:03:26 PM Chandra I love this poem, it states just what I am thinking. USA 4/4/2007 3:23:34 PM     Send this poem to your Friends and Family           Use the following form to support the author by sending this poem to your friends, family and co-workers. Each time that you forward this poem to another friend of yours, the poet will earn marketing credits to get their poem pages displayed even more on the Internet.    Your Name:    Friend's Email:    Note:         Have this poem read to you by one of our Poets! Rate this Poem 1 - Average 2 3 4 5 - Award Winner Votes: 1      Average Rating: 5      points: 5 HELP THIS AUTHOR OUT BY COPYING THE FOLLOWING HTML CODE INTO ANY WEBPAGE <a href = "http://www.voicesnet.org/displayonepoem.aspx?poemid=65148">Click here to visit VoicesNet.com to read the poem called "WHAT IF?" by Keneshia Marie Laarz, Canada</a>