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GOODBYE DAD, a poem by Renee Marie Caruso, USA

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GOODBYE DAD

Goodbye Dad,
I'll see you soon
I'll remember all the good times
Not this afternoon
I'll remember you each and every day
And if I need to talk I'll just have to pray
I'm so sad to see you go
This I hope you will know
It's not fair you went away
I'll never again hear you say "I love you, Renee"
Never will you walk me down the aisle
Never again will I see you smile
Daddy, I'm so sad
I'm too young to lose my Dad
If you were here you'd say, be strong
And maybe even sing me a song
It's just so hard to say goodbye
I can't help but to break down and cry
I know you're in heaven up above
Watching over me with your love
Now I must remember the good times we had
Remember the man, my wonderful Dad
So until we meet again, I'll do what I can to make you proud
Honor your memory and cry out loud
Even though we are apart
Dad, you'll live on within my heart

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NicolaMy father died 3 days ago and this poem really sums up how I feel. I hope it is ok to share it at his funeral.Canada1/18/2010 1:12:56 PM
AmyWhat a touching poem, I could relate to everything you wrote, My dad passed in Feb/08 and I still feel the pain everyday, Canada1/11/2010 11:21:08 PM
GerelDear Renee, This is just wonderful and sad poem. I love it because this poem is what I want to say about and how I feel. I miss my lovely dad every single time. My Dad passed away on October 10, 2009. I never thougth it would happen to me. This is the hardest thing i ever had to face. I just do not know what I can do for my Dad. I am thirty two years old. God bless everyone.Mongolia1/9/2010 8:17:43 PM
jessicaI love this im trying to come up with something to say my dad passed away 6 years ago im putting his pic in the paper and I don't know what to say nothing seems perfect everything I want to say I can't say it in a short paragraphunited states12/16/2009 11:51:53 AM
DAISY PEREZwow! i LOVE this poem because my dad died 4/2/09! ;[ i am still sad though. i miss him sooooooooooooo much. i cant wait to see his beautiful and bright smile. people tell me i smile and look like him!!!!!! :DUNITED STATES OF AMERICA12/7/2009 11:02:17 PM
i love this poem..i too lost my dad about 4 or 5 months ago..it hurt me for the fact htat i was makin all the medical decisions for him..i was the one who had to pull him off the breathin machine..that was the most hurtful part of everything..i held his hand through the time he fought but he just couldnt anymore..i love and miss my daddy so much..i can relate to how it feels not have him around while im growing up11/9/2009 1:52:57 PM
shielai love the poem i cant help but cry i just lose my dad and its very hard to accepPhilippines6/20/2009 4:29:06 AM
Alberto C. Soriano Jr.thank you renee...my dad just past away at 7am today.......im gonna miss you dad i love you so much.....Philippines6/18/2009 10:06:17 AM
maigreat poem !! i loved it , thnx renee ... i miss my dad so much :( Kuwait6/11/2009 1:23:50 AM
im just human very sad poem Im also lost my dad when I was 7 year old I wrote alot of poem for my dad ,I feel about you love your dad will visit you in dream ,belive meUAE6/4/2009 4:47:09 AM
Awoyo Adewale collinsNice poem, i also lost my dad on the 2nd of December 2008. When everyone was surposed to be happy. Thanks for that poem, it gives me hope.Nigeria5/27/2009 4:31:47 PM
Charles SisimiaThe poem is truly emotional. My situation fits in well into the situation of the author. I also lost my dad in 2008. He left us just as we were too young to lose him, but its our hope that one day we will meet him again.Thanks Renee for your poetic assurance and its good to know that we are not only the ones who have the same feelings you have shared..Solomon Islands4/1/2009 4:17:09 AM
alexi really love this poem! i just lost my daad one month ago united states3/21/2009 9:09:59 PM
antonia bogdanowiczthis is so heartfelt i lost my father at 9 years old and i know what its like to be next to him after that car accident and call his name and get no response. it hurts i know.united states3/11/2009 1:08:42 PM
Holly Wattsi loved this poem just reminded me of my dad and made me cry ive not long lost my dad.united kindom2/27/2009 8:37:42 AM
i loved this poem just reminded me of my dad and made me cry2/27/2009 8:36:28 AM
jayson padin be strong kid,i cant imagine how hard it was to say goodbye to your dad....philippines2/16/2009 2:12:02 AM
jayson namocatcat padinit's a sad poem for a young guy/lady that have lost their parents early of their age..be strong enough to grow old with,to smile and accept the unfair side of life but the reality it was..... GOD BLESSphilippines2/16/2009 2:09:40 AM
Lee Emmettbeautiful tribute to your dad ...Australia2/15/2009 6:34:41 AM
Jennifer That was beautiful Renne! My dad died in October 2008 and now it's February 2009. He died of a very sudden massive heart attack. I am only 10 years old and I wrote a poem to, to say at his funeral. I was crying while I was reading this poem and I am crying as I write this. My dad was a great man and tried his best to keep my family happy. Everyday since he died I have cried and there hasn't been a day yet that I haven't. My family and friends are with me everyday and I know my dad is to. Heaven is a better place but we all know it breaks our hearts when loved ones go there! The day that it happened I got a call in my classroom and my teacher said that it was a family emergency. I went to the schools office and my principle drove me home. When I got in my house my mom was sitting on the couch balling. She told me what happen with me barely understanding her because she was crying so hard. I literally fell on the floor crying. From now on I will try to put on a brave face. Great poem Renne!U.S.A2/15/2009 12:26:27 AM
mrs Anna Churchthis poem is emmence i lost my father 2 years ago and i still cant cope with it. i had a break down but i am ok now but i still get my odd days. this poem is just so lovely and its what i would say to my father if he could hear me. thankyouswindon wiltshire england1/21/2009 3:02:55 PM
Lele ramageHey am 21 and a just found out my dad died in october 2008 and i never got to say goodbye this poem is lovelyScotland1/2/2009 9:37:16 PM
TeensExcellentAustralia11/14/2008 12:15:41 PM
Janet PsailaThis made me cry Renee - it's so sad and beautifulAustralia11/5/2008 9:12:58 PM
FefeI like this poem. I lost my dad on july 7 2008 i was with him 4 3 weeks before he died. I was right by his bedside when he took his last breath. He battled with cancer 4 only 8 months. I dont understand y sometimes . But i know he in a better placeusa11/5/2008 6:46:55 PM
María Griselda García CuervaA very good poem, Renee. You show what you really feel about your dad's death.My father died many years ago but I always remember him, he was an excellent father and I'll never forget him. Good memories will help you and your life won't be so hard. Regards from Argentina. GriseldaArgentina9/12/2008 7:13:19 PM
Nileshhey renee, your poem is beautiful just as you and just like your dad. i am sure he misses you too. your poems make me feel how important my dad is, he was important and he will be important than anyone else. i can't say i understand how u feel, but i sure do realise how will i be if something unfortunate happens. take care. and be safe.India9/5/2008 4:54:47 AM
krystine capronthat poem makes me cry beacause i lose my dad in a car crash it is so trueUSA8/24/2008 9:00:44 PM
KATIMy dad is dying as we speak. Your poem is beautiful.USA8/21/2008 4:45:23 PM
Nandita Beautiful sad and touching. May God give you the strength to bear your loss. Wherever he is, i am sure Your dad must be proud of you.India7/26/2008 3:02:58 AM
Angelica GI know how you feel i lost my dad a year ago and i cant help but miss him everydayCA7/15/2008 5:17:30 AM
Teilhaits perfectAustralia7/14/2008 6:47:11 AM
this is such a good poem. its so nice. reminds me of my dad. i had just turned 15 when i lost my dad to cancer. 4 days before xmas. now 6 months on and it gets harder every single day7/3/2008 9:31:21 PM
carolgosh i got to quite readying this poem it makes me cry!!!it reminds me of my dad i lost him when i was 3.just when i got out of the hospital because i had cancer my dad found out he had cancer so he died shortky afterward so i like to write things about him and this poem reminds me so much about him my life depended on him,i think 2 myself wat would he say today if he was here!!!!! in loving memory of Carlton Graftstrom,jr i am 13 now going on 14 gets harder each yearswanville6/26/2008 3:11:14 AM
Mrs DThanks.... my dad died 5 days ago and this really helps me... i hope it is okay i share this at his funeralGuyana6/2/2008 11:25:29 AM
morgani love this poem.. i lost my dad a month ago and im only 15.. this poem really realates to me very well and love it soo much thanks thats all i can sayUSA5/4/2008 5:29:15 PM
carol ThomasI love this poem it reminds me of my dad,I lost him when I was three.And my teacher really likes this one. its so sad and thats my favorite part i read this poem every dayswanville,mn5/2/2008 2:49:17 PM
i really loved this poem!4/28/2008 2:34:57 PM
hey this is very coool song !!!!!!!!!!***2/29/2008 3:56:19 PM
sarah my daddy, passed away about a year ago, i want to thanks you for writing this poem, it means so much.. i can relate to it and found it very moving. canada 1/16/2008 8:17:01 PM
renz palmaresyour letter really touch my heart, my father had recently died 2 hours before he say goodbye, i was hugging him, and we sleep in the same bed with my mom, and then that was it, he died. philippines7/4/2007 11:31:52 PM
Nora E HetrickSAD BUT BEAUTIFUL!! Im only 48 and have lost two babies, both parents, both sets of grandparents, a husband and step-daughter, several aunts and uncles, and several close friends.United States7/4/2007 9:13:39 PM
thelma zaracostasRennee I know I had commented before but I thought this poem deserved another comment thanks again!australia5/20/2007 8:33:35 PM
thelma zaracostasReminds me of my dad a lovely dedication to a dad who was and still is loved so much. he left you so many memories.australia5/20/2007 8:30:40 PM
Deanna DilleyThis is a lovely poem, Renee. I am only 2 yrs. older than you and could never imagine losing my parents. In 2005 out of people I knew or knew of, there were like 13 deaths most between January and May. The hardest was my God-mother dieing 2 weeks before her daughter's wedding. Another was the father of 3 sisters and a boy. I am friends with all 3 women and their mom has not so much as "adopted" me. LOL That was probably the worst year of my life. I'm just glad my parents and for the most part grandparents are fairly healthy. I hope you will always remember the good times with your dad. Keep writing and posting on Voices.USA5/18/2007 5:35:44 PM
thelma zaracostasSuch a beautiful poem from your heart your dad would be so proud of you. Remember all the good times you shared together thank you for this poem.australia5/13/2007 5:55:47 AM
Kristine TrudeauMy sympathy and prayers for you. My appreciation for your poem and your love for you dad.USA3/13/2007 7:25:09 AM
visitorthat was so sad i couldint amagine losing my daddyN/A2/26/2007 10:31:43 AM

 

 
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