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MISS YOU, a poem by Bhaskar Mitra, India Other Love, Romantic, Weddings, Romance, I love you Poems Other Valentines Day Poems DUAL CATEGORY THIS POET COUNTRIES Categories: Love, Romantic, Weddings, Romance, I love you Poems & Valentines Day Poetry Viewed 59563 times Author: Bhaskar Mitra, India Share Poem MISS YOU Silence slumbers in its futile sleep, And the rest of the world sleeps with it, too; But I can’t close my eyes, my Angel, Because I lie so far away from you. I close my eyes and there you are, But when I open my eyes, you elude them; Come to me, my image sweet, why do you, With my eyes, play such a cruel game? When I am well you run away, always; Come now at least to my side. Promise, I shall be a nice boy, And to all your rules shall abide Touch you not, bug you never, Just witness your divine smiles of joy; You be the princess in the palanquin, I’ll be the admiring roadside beggar boy. Your voice is all that I get to hear nowadays, The reasons of which I very well know; But a hundred reasons shall always be there To stop us both from together old to grow. Smile one time, then again, and then one more time; Laugh out loud; and forever shine like a brilliant star; Because you are the only dream that my eyes can see, Wherever I may be, and wherever you are. Click to purchase Print 83212 0 Other Author Poems PAINT BRUSH Recent Site Documents What type of Valentine do you wish to have? Blog by: Mukeshkumar Raval Just Among Friends (A24) Blog by: Chris Johnson ARE LARGE PHARMACUTICAL COMPANIES PLAYING SCROOGE Blog by: Marcia Schechinger Code Red! (A tale of a media man) Short Story by: Edgar Eslit CONGRATULATORY SPEECH Blog by: Dowell Oba finally... Short Story by: bahar sarafrazi Why I Write About Monsters Blog by: Kristine Trudeau Wonder of Wonders Blog by: Rajaram Ramachandran One upon a time.. 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Mita denge khud ko bhi jahan se lekin, Tera naam dil se na mita payenge hum kolkata 9/5/2009 1:10:48 AM Yamikani phillipo its a very nice poem...like it!!! malawi 8/25/2009 5:25:36 AM shweta its really a heart touching poem wonderful! india 8/8/2009 8:34:26 PM Amu is rele lovely....... :D Maldives 8/8/2009 6:02:37 AM eve touching....so u miss some1 too india 7/14/2009 10:23:57 AM Pooja Sweetest one I ever read!! : ) India 6/9/2009 6:33:07 AM ajena patel I love the peom you wrote about miss you and its good to.thanks india 5/15/2009 3:48:27 PM abhinav sachdev awesum man..keep it up India 5/12/2009 7:56:28 AM shila yadav simple and sweet india 5/2/2009 5:18:44 AM Jacksparow of the Jamango Really fantastic.. Keep it up.., India 3/26/2009 4:45:02 PM THE LAST ONE nice one INDIA 3/13/2009 10:55:56 AM Selina Elias you are a really great poet India 3/1/2009 11:16:53 AM bharat balani this just mind blowing n very touching... u.a.e 2/27/2009 8:03:58 AM jinesh ya.......gud.......really..........touching........ India 2/14/2009 10:38:36 AM sapna kataria Dis poem is poem is fab....... it has some feeling in itself.... n luv dese miss u poems India 2/14/2009 9:03:20 AM haritha wow!!!!!!!!!!!!! its so good i liked it plzz write many more india 2/14/2009 4:16:07 AM noraflow nice.really i like this Maroc 2/11/2009 7:24:33 AM Michael Caasi Thumbs up! Philippines 2/8/2009 8:12:58 AM VenuMadhav Really very nice.. Heart touching.. Hyderabad, India 2/1/2009 4:13:33 PM Ainee Bhaskar bhai nice poem.keep it up!n best wishes Pakistan 1/21/2009 4:39:08 AM Aziz Really a sweet and lovely poem Pakistan 1/20/2009 8:57:57 AM BINOJ.SR only one word ''FANTASTIC'' INDIA 12/12/2008 3:41:06 PM yogesh deshmukh great india 12/12/2008 10:46:21 AM Abdulla moosa luthfy i really like this Maldives 12/9/2008 6:24:35 AM Sara james its a great work ,, u have been able to capture the very essence of misssing a dear someone ... keep doin the stuff more India 11/22/2008 10:17:02 AM Sara james its so sweet , u have been able to capture the very essence missing someone ,, India 11/22/2008 10:12:06 AM Dr.B.B.Bhandari hi wondeful poem, so cute and soothing..keep writing, hope to read more of this kind frm u.. bhutan 11/18/2008 6:07:28 AM wow great 11/18/2008 12:53:14 AM yuri ann ming oh my my........i can relate to this poem.it is very very touching.I grt so emotional kingston,jamaica 11/6/2008 11:58:06 AM sahaya fernandez really beautiful india 10/22/2008 2:37:35 AM pranav lovely india 10/16/2008 9:00:13 AM djskumar simply superrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr. no words to explain INDIA 10/13/2008 5:59:56 AM Bhaskar Mitra Thanks everyone for your generous comments. If you liked reading this then check my poetry book on Lulu (go to Lulu_(dot)_com and search for my name). Thanks. India 10/12/2008 4:28:29 AM Bhaskar Mitra Thanks everyone for your generous comments. If you liked reading this then check out www.lulu.com/content/1308120. Thanks. India 10/12/2008 4:25:02 AM sandip this poem also describe my feelings as i'm far away from my love, but thanks to the person who invented fones, we keep i touch via txt & call, hearing her voice is just like when doctors put life support on a dieing person. fiji 9/29/2008 6:09:50 AM Sam No words can say how heart felt and touching that poem is, brings tears to my eyes South Africa 9/24/2008 8:22:37 PM ANKIT PRIYAMVAD just i say a single word "heart touching"...... INDIA (JHARKHAND) 9/20/2008 10:31:05 AM shorty love it st.lucia 8/31/2008 8:31:15 PM woy..woy..woy..i love this poem it touch me. 8/31/2008 8:27:17 PM Subham Dutta It is very good. India 8/20/2008 4:15:01 PM sagar i like ur poem,ur poem really touches my heart......... thanks for writing so sweet poem... INDIA 8/20/2008 1:24:29 AM Kaycee I was so touched when I read this poem that I felt like crying cos I have a girlfriend halfway around the world from where I am, and God! I miss her so much. Thank you so much Bhaskar for finally granting voice to my heart cos I forwarded it to her once I had read it. England 8/19/2008 7:00:39 PM Kaycee This poem is so touching I had to immediately forward it to my girlfriend who is half way around the world from where I am. I miss her so much; thank you Bhaskar for finally giving voice to my heart. United Kingdom 8/19/2008 6:56:38 PM rajeev hi h r u ...................................... india 8/6/2008 6:36:33 AM Shruthi.R.Nair its really nice... it has touched me deep in my heart.. bcz i hav been missing my LOVE...madly.. am waiting for him..i know he will come..Bhaskar Mitra! well done! proud that this work came from an Indian! bcz am too an Indian!! India 8/4/2008 2:56:01 PM Fatima This is one of the best poems that i have ever read. Good Job, chap. This poem moves me deep down cuz i do really miss someone like hell. Unhappily, he is too concerened, and too busy with his work to think of me. Morocco 8/3/2008 7:49:19 AM jazzmin I love this poem it is really good.! =]] good job.. oregon 7/26/2008 7:47:33 PM     Send this poem to your Friends and Family           Use the following form to support the author by sending this poem to your friends, family and co-workers. 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