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"IF I WASNT A KNOT, COULD YOU STILL TIE ME?" a poem from Duo Ari Zetak, USA

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Poet:

Duo Ari Zetak, USA

   
Results: All Round 1 Poem Reviews are completed.
   
Categories:

Holocaust Poems & Metaphor Poetry

   

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 Poem:

IF I WASNT A KNOT, COULD YOU STILL TIE ME?

 

feels like the storm is coming
old has a different connotation
for those in danger of aging
wasting away
the longer the wait
the longer the days
the more time spent taking your time
coherent to a type
a tape recording
of the last epiphany you had
about how life is a monster
a beast without a plan
that eyes see the colors of life
like hands feel pain
like heads turn in surprise
and chests pound like drums
letting war ring out loud
persecuting the ear with hype
as if fighting was a celebration
for human life
or danger was life's only breath
taking on death
with a voice like a mute
screaming
as we age
excuse
and blame
our sins on fame
fortune and faith
our lives are running short
like candles in the wind
or a sleepers song
singing
let war ring out loud
like time had a say
let death come
and take us all away
let war ring out loud
like time had a say
let death come
and take us all away
praying our tears will be heard
crying our prayers will be wiped away
time tells us all
were only here to stay
as long as we have enough blood to pay
so lets drench these fields in life's name
the sacrifice to live, is the cost of death
if the freedom of life is given up
the fear of death can be shed
as the weight of heaven pushes down
until you have made hell your bed
sleep and let time fly by

if life leaves you in the night

then you cant complain you're dead

 
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CheyI thought it was AWESOME and AMAZINGUSA5/12/2009 8:16:27 PM
Salem Very interesting and I love itUSA5/11/2009 1:39:57 PM
A.R.L.N.I think it is a interesting peom. I am doing a poetry project on anything I want and I was wondering if I could use this poem. It is brilliant. God Bless! A.R.l.NUnited States of America.3/19/2009 8:36:02 PM
nellyit was intrestingiraq3/12/2009 9:34:40 PM
YAH!!!GOOD JOB! THIS IS GREAT!!!!!!CANADA3/6/2009 1:43:52 PM
roxy i like it it was very good actually it was wonderfullunited states 2/4/2009 7:42:26 PM
roxy it is good i like it alotunited states 2/4/2009 7:41:06 PM
ashleiwow this is poem really beautiful. i haven't read much poetry before, but it is truly exceptional. I dont know why people are saying this has no connection with the Holocaust; it is a deeply saddenning poem, with the feeling of dread and hopelessness im sure was relevant to the Holocaust and those who experienced it. awesome job man :)australia10/26/2008 3:21:35 AM
Ruby HallmanThis poem is very profound, I love it!! Keep writing great metaphor poems. God blessUSA10/14/2008 5:26:41 PM
nickythis is really good and it can relate to the holocaust considering i know much about the holocaust, but it is not an obvious connection. but that may not be what you were aiming for. good though onto constructive crit. the only thing i would say is too use punctuation although it sounds annoying it will help. because in using stanzas and periods and such it would give the poem more depth and emphasize the main ideas as well as details. give the reader time to let the images and feelings sink in.usa10/1/2008 6:53:47 PM
taytianaIt's fine eahCanada9/15/2008 8:32:14 PM
EllenThis poem i believe has nothing really to do about the holocaust... Im jewish, and my great great great grandfather was part of the holocaust, so i know alot about it becuase he past the story on and on.. and this makes really no connection... if you want to hear what happend to him and how he survived just leave a message saything that and i will gladley share it SO WE DO NOT FORGET! ANyhow the poem i did enjoy.. thank you.. =]Denmark5/19/2008 6:43:17 PM
kerryyeah lola id love that actually wow :Dusa5/9/2008 1:40:08 AM
Lolai love this poem a lot and we are studieing about the holocaust and i was wondering if i could print this poem to show my teacher so she could read it to the class!!!!????USA4/29/2008 7:56:50 PM
Joe Muldoondude, your the man you really paint a scene with your writingengland3/28/2008 12:58:30 AM
Elizabeth AnneI love this. I'm not quite sure why, but it's really something amazing. Congratulations.USA10/7/2007 7:38:01 PM
   

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