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Voicesnet is an Internet Poetry Publisher and this poem has been entered into our international online poetry competition. Poems are judged in different poetry categories by multiple literary judges.
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Poet: |
Pamela Strickland Thompson, USA
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Results:
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All Round 1 Poem Reviews are completed.
* 1 Star Finalist
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Categories:
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Allusion Poems & Life Poetry
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115046
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Poem: |
A DREAM
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Over the hills and far away
My mind drifts. As the cool breeze of
Spring flows through my hair
And the sun shines down upon me.
I dream of a happy place.
This play is not rich, nor is it full of people.
It’s a very quiet place that only a few people reside.
Myself, my children, the animals and the one I love.
I dream of this rich land with threes as tall
As the clouds, miles and miles of beautiful flowers
Growing on the mountain sides and valleys.
The birds sing and the dogs bark.
Lord what a lovely place this would be
If it were more than
Just a Dream.
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| From | Comment about poem or author | Response Country | Response Added | | liz | yo whre r the allusions at? | afrika | 8/18/2009 5:12:25 PM | | Marlen Ponce | It's an awesome poem,... it expresses what you really want to say.,,, it took me to my dream place too,... it'd be perfect and wonderful "If it were more than Just a Dream",... i love it!!!!! | USA | 1/13/2009 7:02:57 PM | | BOB | AWESOME AND PEACEFUL | USA | 12/9/2008 4:01:32 PM | | A. Sulaiman | What a lovely dream! It may come true someday. Your words are like a cold breeze in a summer's hot day. | Lebanon | 11/16/2008 4:42:24 PM | | kanika khanna | Nice imagery Pamela. Enjoyed it to the full. | india | 10/3/2008 6:12:09 AM | | p.a.noushad | very beautiful your nerration is. | india | 10/3/2008 5:01:57 AM | | p.a. noushad | dear pamela,i love your poems very much. | India | 9/11/2008 4:51:14 AM | | thelma | Dear Pamela
Dreams do come true lovely poem! | australia | 10/2/2007 7:05:48 PM |
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