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Poet: |
Sonila Reka, UK
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Results:
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All Round 1 Poem Reviews are completed.
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Categories:
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Love, Romantic, Weddings, Romance, I love you Poems & Short Love Poetry
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Poem: |
LOVE WITHIN A ROSE
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When a rose is not being looked after
The rose will slowly dry
When love starts to be forgotten
The love will slowly die.
When a rose pricks you
It doesn’t hurt for long
When love breaks your heart
The pain is too strong.
When a rose starts to open
It has a beautiful smell
When love starts to grow
It feels like heaven and not hell.
When too many raindrops fall upon the rose
It will eventually destroy its existence
When love is washed with unhappy tears
It will gradually keep a far distance.
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| From | Comment about poem or author | Response Country | Response Added | | Michael Wallace | Great metaphor.Eminently readable. | Canada | 11/22/2009 3:37:29 PM | | judy | very nice!!!:) | usa | 5/11/2009 12:50:22 AM | | Jackie Maina | Quite awesome.. | Kenya | 5/6/2009 7:39:50 AM | | Linda Chew | This is so beautiful! | USA | 10/10/2008 12:10:06 PM | | Mary Kariuki | I love the comparison | Kenya | 6/24/2008 12:37:32 PM | | Chiru gabriella | very original compparing a rose with love,and see the efects on both of them..
i loved it | Romania | 1/31/2008 7:01:06 AM | | Erik Estabrook | great write, I could feel the pain and passion | USA | 12/11/2007 4:48:41 PM | | ??? | When a rose pricks you
It doesn’t hurt for long
When love breaks your heart
The pain is too strong. | ??? | 10/24/2007 6:51:15 AM | | miriam | this poem is great and so true, get em!!!1 | u.s. | 9/13/2007 10:02:18 PM | | ElaineTatam | Everytime you write a poem it so sad but i really love all your poems and I bought your book. | Walthamstow | 9/1/2007 3:52:09 PM | | Nicolla | I like it very much. | uk | 7/13/2007 8:34:40 AM |
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