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Voicesnet is an Internet Poetry Publisher and this poem has been entered into our international online poetry competition. Poems are judged in different poetry categories by multiple literary judges.
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Poet: |
Jhamelia Petallana Manahan, Vietnam
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Results:
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All Round 1 Poem Reviews are completed.
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Categories:
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Christian Poems & Inspirational Poems, Motivational Poetry
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Poem: |
HOLDING ON
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Day by day, I was faced with a battle My weakness and vulnerability caused my frequent stumble I searched for an outstretched arm that might free me from being forlorn My heart my conceding, I was scared I couldn’t go on
I found a hand or two Trying to grab me from the quicksand I was trapped into Likewise, they were held captive by the thief that caused me to mourn My heart was conceding, I was scared I couldn’t go on.
I was falling into the pit of loneliness, bitterness and pride I made a deafening cry that swirled only in mind Nobody could notice, nobody harkened my moan My soul was conceding, I knew I couldn’t go on
I let lose of the grip that kept me from falling Not knowing where to end up until I felt someone on me holding He said His name was JESUS, the son of God who was crucified for a cause A sudden spark…my soul that was conceding began to feel the Holy Ghost
At once, I felt at ease, free from the pit that incarcerated my soul I thought my stubborn heart had to pay its toll But when I heard Jesus’ call I replied ‘Lord, I will give you my all." |
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