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"LOSING SOMEONE YOU LOVE" a poem from Waheeda Crisse Ali fairbairn, Trinidad

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Poet:

Waheeda Crisse Ali fairbairn, Trinidad

   
Results: All Round 1 Poem Reviews are completed.
   
Categories:

Funerals Poems & Sad, Grief, Sympathy, Broken Heart Poetry

   

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 Poem:

LOSING SOMEONE YOU LOVE

 

Losing someone you love is pretty tough
It nakes your smooth road rough
It's so hard it may sometimes make you mad
it leaves like a sad little lad.
Sorry to say but some people's heart are like clay
that is what makes our loved ones go away.
"Them people really have to pay for what they did to me today!"
I miss them a great deal, so much that my tears could fill a field.
On special days we miss their ways such as when they prepare delicious trays.
When I have to let you go and I express my feelings to other they just say "So!"
Then I am left like a fruit now bearing on a tree On my knees calling out to thee!

 
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Ashley Jeromewhen i read this poem it made me cry.This poem is very good it made me think of my friend russelsheldon1/20/2010 10:52:09 AM
ashleywhen i read the message tears come down and its caues i lost my grandma oct 3 1997weslaco12/20/2009 1:55:09 PM
ashleywhen i read this tears come down my face caues i lost my grandma oct 3 2009 and i really miss her weslaco12/20/2009 1:53:46 PM
Manei when i read the message,tears came rolling down on my chicks because i have lost my mother past years.It's been 5 years now but i can't forget her am still crying when i wrote this letter you have really touch my heart.My e-mail address is manei1@webmail.co.za am staying in south AfricaSouth Africa10/9/2009 8:37:24 AM
i can definatley understand where these people are coming from. it really hurts to lose someone that you loved so dearly.10/5/2009 2:56:10 PM
C.Jacobs-BrownThis is a very sweet poem.. i lost my Boyfriend..but life has to live on i will not let that bring down ...he is in a better place watchin over me.....so may he rest in paradise..and i will see him again.US9/23/2009 1:52:38 PM
C.Jacobs-Brown This poem is a very nice poem. I Lost my Boyfriend..but lik Ms.Boyd said, life has to live on and i cant let that bring me down . He is in a better place watchin ova me.so may he rest n paradise.And i will see him again...US9/23/2009 1:49:54 PM
Ashiiemy nanny and poppy died and now i feel like my heart has torn in two , they were my everything , when times got rough id always go to them, and i miss them so much it hurts , i never thought i could hurt like this , they were my everything. i really like this poem xxAustralia7/27/2009 5:56:09 AM
denisei miss u and i wanted to do is kiss u goodbye and wonder why u had to go we will never know u were sick and could not be saved and as u lay in your grave the pain and frear allways seems near i wish i could see u agine days go by and nights seems so cold and loney u were my brother my blood my life i did not know u that much all i know u were suffering as i watched u die the tears never go away and the pain will never heal u are gone thats what it is the good time of me and u will allways be in my heartus 4/24/2009 10:37:30 PM
i love this poem2/11/2009 6:04:37 PM
porshaI miss you so dare noting can sotp you god sell you in pain he said my chid come with me you falled him in the lite and you dravd awoey.LI11/18/2008 10:04:57 AM
Jessicai really like this poem i lost my grandma on 10/11/08 and it was very tough for meOelwein, Iowa10/21/2008 4:35:34 PM
unknown caller that was so sweetaustralia8/2/2008 9:36:26 AM
Myesha BoydThis poem is a very nice poem it took me by when i lost someone tha i was really close two.....but life have to live on we cant let that bring down ...cause we know that they are ina better place watchin down on us.....rest in peace to sll my love ones i will see you again and the great place they call heavenUnited States6/10/2008 3:04:46 PM
stanly hardore!thats so sad and explains so much<33brazil 5/8/2008 8:32:40 PM
rachelle fertilien I love this poem and the way that you use your methapors. I have just lost a friend and the moment that i read you r poem i knew that was what i wanted in the back of his obiturary.florida5/8/2008 10:48:53 AM
laceythis poem is wicked have you wrote any about sad goodbyes it ould be great if you could let me know many thanks laceyunited kingdom3/9/2008 7:28:32 PM
Morganthis is an inspiring poem because i can relate to it because im losing my motherAlberta2/12/2008 11:16:36 AM
wow this one is so nice its really true 2/1/2008 1:27:19 PM
Jessie AddingtonI really like this poem it reminds me alot of my ex-boyfriend...Shawnee Oklahoma1/28/2008 3:19:28 PM
apple santosi like ur poem it tells how i feel today..... good jobphilippines1/28/2008 5:14:59 AM
ynalove the poem remidns me of a gurl who cried over her dead husbands body hard to let go true love...philippines1/18/2008 11:45:32 PM
AlexandriaJust yesterday I found out that my grandmother's kidneys are failing. Now she is gone. It hurts so much and I don't think I can handle the pain. I love her so much. Even though I knew this day was going to come, it still took me by surprise. My eyes can't cry anymore and my mind isn't on anything but my grandmother. Loosing someone you love and someone so close is the hardest thing I have ever had to face in my life.USA12/19/2007 11:08:11 AM
thelmaIt is so sad when we loose some one we love, you have described your feelings so well in this poem Waheeda, thank you for your contribution and welcome to voices.australia12/13/2007 6:28:14 AM
Saskiai dont really think this poem describes how you feel when you loose a loved one. i never went down on my knees calling out their name. i lost my best friend who i've known my whole life [which is an awfully long time] and i didnt feel like you mention in the poem. its more like your whole world comes crashing down...South Africa12/13/2007 6:16:26 AM
unknownI like this poem alot.. good work.Florida12/9/2007 10:03:49 PM
unknownwierd....12/9/2007 10:02:59 PM
lacilove the poem keep up the good work but i hope you could find or experience the other side of the tracksamerica11/19/2007 12:51:46 AM
lacithis poem is exactly how i felt when my first love had to move but the only diffrence is that i had friends that cared because they went throught the same thing but the poem is something i could relate toamerica11/19/2007 12:50:53 AM
   

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