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Voicesnet is an Internet Poetry Publisher and this poem has been entered into our international online poetry competition. Poems are judged in different poetry categories by multiple literary judges.
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Poet: |
Jordan Michele Comeaux, USA
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Results:
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All Round 1 Poem Reviews are completed.
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Categories:
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Animals Poems & Horses Poetry
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97650
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Poem: |
THE STALLION
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The stallion waves his mighty main and stomps upon the ground
He thunders down the rolling hills on which he can be found
He calls his mare and she comes to him, as quickly as she can
She does not dare to disobey for fear of angering him
Though mighty and foreboding, the lion and the cougar
Can not harm this mighty beast with breath that is like thunder
No hand can tame this beauty, nor can he with a word be stilled
But even in the midst of this something can control him
The Lord of hosts who made him, his haunches and his withers
Can calm the mighty stallion and can bend him to His will
So however proud the stallion be he should not ever forget
That there is one more powerful who can control him yet.
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| From | Comment about poem or author | Response Country | Response Added | | Kristina Peterson :) | this poem is ssooooooooo good!
it's actually realy true!
Good job! | Canada, Ontario, Bowmanville | 6/6/2009 8:17:06 PM | | horselover | truely amaizing! | USA | 3/10/2009 8:52:39 AM | | Sarah Smith | Your poem is so cool. I like it beacause I LOVE horses | USA | 12/10/2008 6:37:48 PM | | Xx-horseeloverr-xX | I love your poem. It seems so powerful within the first 2 stanzas.Good Job.I am not gonna use my real name
| | 12/5/2008 6:15:31 AM | | Loved it amazing | england | 4/16/2008 3:11:23 PM | | NO NAME | i love horses and poetry this poem has inspired me to beleive in what i hAVE TRIED TO BELIEVE IN ALL MY LIFE THAT WILD HORSS ARE THERE!!! | USA | 4/5/2008 1:47:12 PM | | Echo | keep it up! u r 1 great author. i can't write that good! | Michigan | 3/20/2008 7:56:27 AM | | Daisy | um interesting, how old were you when you wrote this? being one of your good friends and all I really think I would have known about this. lol. well depending on your age you did an ok job. | United States of America | 2/18/2008 8:56:16 PM | | Tammy | i loved the poem. where did u get the inspiration? im like horse crazy | Australia | 5/24/2007 11:34:56 PM | | Jordan Anderson | I love your poem it is awesome. I love it cause it is about horses and I love horses and animals | United States of America | 4/27/2007 6:57:59 PM |
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