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Voicesnet is an Internet Poetry Publisher and this poem has been entered into our international online poetry competition. Poems are judged in different poetry categories by multiple literary judges.
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Poet: |
Okhet Sydney Matubandlela, South Africa
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Results:
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All Round 1 Poem Reviews are completed.
* 1 Star Finalist
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Categories:
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Season Poems & Winter Poetry
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99939
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Poem: |
WINTER SUNSET
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The complexion, nature couldn’t do any better.
It is a dream to every commuter men.
Appreciation manifests upon their faces
As they shovel and trowel in competition
And hope you bring against their exhaustion
That a cup burning of hot coffee and tea,
As the wood struggles in ash and coal production,
Shall sooth their dry icing skin of rubber.
I could not move away,
Move away from the comfort, of thy rays
While they marked a terrible night of freezing
As they partially satisfied my skin,
My mind fantasized as I watched thy beauty.
What if I could fly and run the tips of my fingers?
So as to raise the speed of thy furnace!
And fascinate my muscle cover in warmth.
A cry of agony I heard form above.
The poor bird was saying its prayers
Protesting and procrastinating as it did.
A glimpse through nets of drying leaves
I could see, a posture like a statue
Shivering it couldn’t, it was deep in thought
For the sight of your face implied;
Another task added for tomorrow
To today’s mission unaccomplished.
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| From | Comment about poem or author | Response Country | Response Added | | Stanley | Wow dats a great poem man, keep writting you ar marvelous, i like yo unique style! | South Africa | 2/11/2009 5:48:18 AM | | i'm your biggest fan | you go boy you have more to offer i believe so people of mzansi give the guy a chance | rsa | 10/30/2008 9:02:54 AM | | I thought your poem waS OK | | 6/8/2008 5:35:55 PM |
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