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Voicesnet is an Internet Poetry Publisher and this poem has been entered into our international online poetry competition. Poems are judged in different poetry categories by multiple literary judges.
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Poet: |
Jane D. Lobo, Qatar
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Results:
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All Round 1 Poem Reviews are completed.
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Categories:
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Birthday Poems & Children, children's Poetry
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Poem: |
ON YOUR BIRTHDAY DEAR NIECE
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She pulls down everything & keeps you on the toe
She slips out of all hands and makes everyone go
She makes cute faces & puts a smile on every face
She fusses for every bit, & lines up all on a race
She tires every one yet boosts them with zest
She blabbers sweet words & makes forget rest
Her smile would make you forget all pain
Her presence invigorates your every vein
Her cries would steal away your tomorrow
Her laughter would chase all your sorrow
Her charm makes the world go round & round
Her every step is like a jingling sweet sound
She fills the life of all with her tender smile
Her innocent looks, takes you away a mile
She tickles your nerve with her lovely smell
Her whisper enchants to cast a great spell
She is full of warmth and a radiant shine
Her gentle touch would shed out your whine
God Almighty was gracious and gifted a doll
Filled our hearts with joy, & happiness most of all
22 May 2003, a day we would always treasure
Blossomed yet a year, that’s a great pleasure
Showers of blessings as you turn Three, sweetz
Happy Birthday ANGEL, my dearest niece.
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| From | Comment about poem or author | Response Country | Response Added | | Jane | Thank You for the great responses.. am overwhelmed :) | | 3/22/2009 3:41:35 PM | | sangeetha | gosh!! this is one of the sweetest poems i have read
really awesome work. | india | 3/21/2009 3:01:00 AM | | Nancy Crossland | Hello - Jane- What a fortunate little girl to have an aunt who so fondly and lovingly has captured her charm. Lovely poem! | USA | 11/2/2008 1:03:54 PM | | a nice poem to a sweet girl | | 11/1/2008 9:42:28 PM | | connie schiffner | you could be speaking about my granddaughter or any precious little girl. thank you for sharing, it really touches the heart | canada | 9/6/2008 10:37:18 PM |
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